Summer.
Heated thoughts fly,
Thirsty soul seeks relief;
Escape route now is desired
Once more.
Anticipation holds captive,
Heavens tremble with hope;
First drops now grace
The world.
Heated earth cries,
Burden has been lifted;
Nostalgia beckons our thoughts
Again.
Childhood revisited, we dance;
It has arrived at last,
First drops of joy;
Monsoon.
For OSI-Tremble With Image From .Here.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Lovely.very well written.:)
Thanks to: Sneha.glad u liked the write-up. many thanks! š
I feel the summer. Beautiful Leo. š Keep writing your heart š
Dancing in the rain, well, for me it was playing soccer in the rain. Playing for boys = dancing for girls.
Thanks to: Ajey Padival.yes. dance, play.. just an expression. š glad u liked it!
Thanks to: Tabitha.glad u like it! much appreciated!
This was so beautiful, just what I needed to read today. "Heavens tremble with hope" š
Thanks to: Aayushi.yeah.. š first drops of rain.. we had it last night! š
š u already exp d showers ? send in here some too š chennai needs lot more monsoon than banglore š ..ur poem makes me to feel , dance n jump in the rain , only if it comes š
Leo, I love all your lines..indeed you write very subtly but so beautifully…Mine is hereHave a beautiful Sunday!hugsshakira
A very positive feel!recipe of love brews well
Such passion here. We become the elements become us.
very nice read for my thirsty soul this morning
Wow! I felt the raindrops..on my face… so very soothing.. Thanks!
Thanks to: A Dreamy Gal.yeah.. quite nice showers.. thunder n lightning too.. u come here if u want it, i wont send there! :Pglad u liked the poem, if u do that dance, send me a photo! š
Thanks to: Shakira.glad u liked my lines, subtle yet beautiful! š will drop by asap at urs!
Thanks to: Gautami.glad u liked it! š
Thanks to: Sandy Carlson.yeah.. we become the elements; they become us indeed! š
Thanks to: Odd Inkwell.glad u liked the water! š
Thanks to: Ramesh Sood.glad u liked it and felt it through my words! š
you have captured the personal relationship with nature in a wonderful way~
Very nice! Wonderful photo.
I missed my childhood…when for every heavy downpour or even just a drizzle, I would invite my playmates and dance wildly and with such a carefree spirit…happy were the days!
Thanks to: Tammie. glad u liked it, and i do feel that reln with nature too š
Thanks to: Tumble words.yes. even i found it attractive :)glad u liked it.
Thanks to: Amity.monsoon makes me yearn for my childhood days too š glad u liked it!
Beautiful and refreshing. Just like your first rain.
Storms and the anticipation of them seem to be the order of the day for this prompt. We've had some pretty impressive thunderstorms here the last couple of nights, and "Heavens trembling with hope" is a perfect description of how they felt.
Thanks to: Mojo.here as well. and yeah, i iking the weatehr! š
Thanks to: Carina.glad u liked it! š
water can bring such joy!!
After reading this, I am looking forward to summer.
This poem captures all the spirit of summer. I really enjoyed this poem. Amazing photo also Leo.
Leo, this is endearing! I now know what joy the Monsoon brings since we also get it here in AZ. It is a BIG DEAL when it arrives and oh what wonderful lightening storms we get to see. Your poem captures the feeling well. Thanks for you visit to my blog.
Thanks to: Pie.yes.. such joy! š
Thanks to: Four Winds.i'm looking forward to monsoon! š
Thanks to: The Write Girl.glad u liked it so much! š
Thanks to: Kathie.yeah.. its a lovely feeling! glad u liked it! š