Who reigns?
My heart, the kingdom; who’s the king?
Who reigns?
Is it me or you? that thought pains.
Let me decide; why can’t I win?
You held me; now I’m lost within.
Who reigns?
Who reigns?
I am sure, I went the right way;
Who reigns?
If you hate, why love you do feign?
I may falter, yet close I’ll stay;
It’s my life, let me have my say.
Who reigns?
Who reigns?
Hope dwindles now, a strand so thin;
Who reigns?
Has all my effort been in vain?
I walk alone, but I shall win;
In my favor, the dice shall spin.
Who reigns?
Who reigns?
For long I’ve fought, this battle within;
Who reigns?
Smile a facade, masks much deep pains;
Time to end this battle I’m in,
My heart, the kingdom; who’s the king?
Who reigns?
For One Single Impression
Form: Rondelet
Form: Rondelet
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
nicely written dear…!!!Who reigns is your li'l heart out of hatred, full of love..!!!dear friend, you are special..!!!
:))really nice leo :)loved it x)
As always excellently written.Yvonne.
This should be set to music…I could almost hum the tune.b
Love reigns!
I guess this poetry is about the struggle within? Good post!
Ah yes, very well said. These were my first thoughts too, after reading the prompt. Good work:)
hey Vinu, this was really a lovely take. sometimes we feel someone else makes our decisions for us. isn't it? well written.
Wonderful take. I liked it very much. rein in the ruined reign
you always give lyrics to the music in my heart!wonderful to read you always
Frnds are always thr in every step to make it more beautiful..:)Hw r u vinay? hws ur job and work place?
A vitally important question there.
Dear Vinu, Good Evening!At times we get carried away;it is true.Someone else influences us.But the you be the king and do win!Really touching lines!HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY tO your Mom dear! Wishing you a wonderful evening, Sasneham, Anu
nicely portrayed thoughts 😀 well done ^^btw..happy mother's day to all the mothers in the world! ^^(p.s. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)
well,you rhyme with a reason!Awesome post! loved it! 🙂
Leo, very well written. The struggle of who reigns is one that goes on in most of us. This struggle, the indecision, and changes we make. Your work describes it well.
A clear reflection of your inner battle …
very well composed.
Let any one reign as long as it gives comfot to the heart.. Leo, I am amazed and awestruck with your page.. it's beautiful.. befitting to your poetry.. Wow! Loved it..
many thanks Ms. MEDURI, and you're special too. glad u liked it! 🙂
thanks very much CHOCOLATE LOVER! 🙂
many thanks YVONNE! 🙂
BARBARA,many thanks! 🙂 i shall try, but m not good!
amen to that BROSREVIEW! 🙂
yes VIBHUSHAN, it is. thanks v. much! 🙂
hmm.. great minds think alike AAYUSHI? 🙂
J.S.W, yeah.. we all feel that indeed. thanks!:)
many thanks GAUTAMI! 🙂
likewise i'm sure DESI! 🙂
hi PRAMS, m fine and job/workplace is good too! glad u liked my poem! 🙂
hi ANTHONY, many thanks. glad u liked it! 🙂
hi ANU, many thanks! yes.. sometimes we're influenced by someone..! Happy Mom's day to u too..!
hi AYU, many thanks. glad u liked it. i did check out ur blog/uniquely done blogroll and nice to see my avatar i it! just nt findin time to comment.. will do asap.! 🙂
hi PERIWINKLE, sometimes i do, sometimes i don't. 🙂 glad u liked it! 🙂
hi ROB, many thanks. yes, indecision is part of many decisions indeed! 🙂
many thanks DREAMY! 🙂
thanks DEEPAK! 🙂
welcome to my blog RAMESH SOOD, thanks very much for liking both my poetry and my page, for both are of my design! 🙂
Who reigns? Let heart reign, but I will get insane…Who reigns? Let mind reign, but I will be a fool…Nice…nice thoughts Leo…I love the message…and whichever reigns, makes us what we are!And nothing will be in vain! As long as the battle is well-fought!
excellent poem. it is hard to tell who reigns sometime. Well put!
hi AMITY, i tht u were already 😛 but ok. i hope its a nicely fought one too! 😀
many thanks HOFF! 🙂
i love this that the heart is king and reigns…yes, no, maybe…possibly…well, today right now…
Nice thoughts about this age-old question.
haha PIE, we are never sure at any time are we?! 🙂
many thanks TUMBLEWORDS! 🙂
Well done Leo, I hope love reigns.
i hope so too TAMMY! 🙂