Some feelings
Just can’t die
Enigmatic like
Smiling tears
Loving fears
Some is pain
Some is not
Loving tears
We are gifted
Can be forgot
Mind confused
Am I right?
Can I escape?
For some time,
Am I really fine?
Am I true?
Or just a lie
Am I worth?
All I do hurt
It’s so absurd
Yet some voice
Tells me off
Asks my silence
Gives me hope
All I can cope
Yet that voice
Spurs me on
Hold it I dear
Close to mind
I shall be fine
Some feelings
Just can’t die
Enigmatic like
Yet I’ll be okay
When it stays
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Nice work, especially first para…
Nice one.. :)"Loving tearsWe are giftedCan be forgot"
Good one. Speaking for myself, I can say it's great when the old feelings finally die. They can be like hangers on.
Wonderful:Yvonne,
some feelings are too god to die 🙂
Some of those feelings just shouldn't be there.
hi AAYUSHI, thanks a lot friend! glad u liked it & even i felt my start was quite good! 🙂
hi ADAM, thanks very much! 🙂 glad u liked it and yes, they can be forgot!
yes, even i think sometimes its better like that.. thanks SANDY! 🙂
thanks YVONNE! 🙂
DESI, yes indeed! 🙂
yes, perhaps they shouldn't, but they are ANTHONY, thanks! 🙂
An enigma indeed, but also sounds like the words of an internal struggle; which sounds so familiar to me. I like the rythmn of your poem and the introspective nature of your thoughts.
spoken true leo our emotions can be felt so strong sometimes like a strong wind and a kite other days as a soft breeze caressing a cheek… beautiful
Good one!
Unexplained feelings is sure an enigma Leo!Good poem!
hi LOCH ROB, yes indeed it is an internal struggle so familiar to many. glad u liked the rhythm! thank u so very much! 🙂
a lovely comparison that u have made PIE, so true and thanks for sharing! 🙂
thanks you BROSREVIEW! 🙂
thanks a lot AMITY! 🙂
a poem to ponder… Mysterious 🙂
thanks v.much ARV! 🙂
Nice!!
thanks a lot TUMBLEWORDS! 🙂
Well done. I liked smiling and loving tears.
Great thoughts! Very deep, as always. =)
thanks very much TAMMY, glad u liked it!
thanks CARINA! 🙂
Lovely !! You peeped into my mind and wrote this 😉 U know y m i asking you ryt ?..but this poem is too too good …Well i neednt tell nythng more i guess..u understand my silence very well 🙂
Nicely done- I liked the feeling of hope at the end~
i did? really DREAMY? dint know! 😀 anyways.. friends do understand silence! 🙂
hi PATTI, many thanks! 🙂