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Chained now,
I cannot move,
Invisible tight bonds.
Chained now, I cannot breathe again;
Past calls.
Die soon, no reincarnation;
Too many questions now,
Find no answers.
Failure,
Old memories,
Still suffocate my mind;
Pain reveals, solace where to find?
Future?
Horizon seems clouded, so dark,
Journey, do I embark?
No hope I see,
Vaguely.
Moments stay still,
Replay, caught in a trap;
No direction, enigma stays;
I yearn
To break free of expectations;
Yet they never let go,
Cannot shrug off;
Just pain,
Needless troubles,
I endure, I feel nothing;
Relentless, I push forward more,
Now numb.
Is that the border? Ah, sweet freedom!
Desires dance with me,
Let me cross quick;
Escape.
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Sigh…I can so relate to it!I wish escape was really a solution…alas it isnt it just a illusion!Nice poem loved ur creativity π
wow..wonderful write up…!!! When read in one go..it felt like am reading the script of an Action sequence..!!!nicely written dear..!!!
Excellent poetry. I read it 3-4 times to get the full feel.
Like The Fool, I read it 3 times. Good one!Sureindran R. – Escape
Escape is indeed a sweet freedom when we are suffering. Nice poem. π
To be in bondage with the past and feeling you ca't get out of its clutch is sure an enigma!But to escape from it all is bravery!Very nice poem Leo!
The sense of loss, claustrophobic existence and desperation to run away were all nicely woven.Good job.!
What a write simply fantastic..got to vote for sure
mmmm.. read it thrice.. still cudnt relate totally.. bt yeah watevr i grasped, if it is right (tht is, my interpretation), it was a creative way 2 put forward it.. moreovr the formation of lines and the design u'v created, resembles a series of butterfly cinquains, nd thts beautiful π
I can so very relate to it ! Need i say more ??? Then here it is – lovely !!!!
amazing wordplay!
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Lovely π