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Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Sigh…I can so relate to it!I wish escape was really a solution…alas it isnt it just a illusion!Nice poem loved ur creativity 🙂
wow..wonderful write up…!!! When read in one go..it felt like am reading the script of an Action sequence..!!!nicely written dear..!!!
Excellent poetry. I read it 3-4 times to get the full feel.
Like The Fool, I read it 3 times. Good one!Sureindran R. – Escape
Escape is indeed a sweet freedom when we are suffering. Nice poem. 🙂
To be in bondage with the past and feeling you ca't get out of its clutch is sure an enigma!But to escape from it all is bravery!Very nice poem Leo!
The sense of loss, claustrophobic existence and desperation to run away were all nicely woven.Good job.!
What a write simply fantastic..got to vote for sure
mmmm.. read it thrice.. still cudnt relate totally.. bt yeah watevr i grasped, if it is right (tht is, my interpretation), it was a creative way 2 put forward it.. moreovr the formation of lines and the design u'v created, resembles a series of butterfly cinquains, nd thts beautiful 🙂
I can so very relate to it ! Need i say more ??? Then here it is – lovely !!!!
amazing wordplay!
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Lovely 🙂