April 26th – Vibes

First time we met

I could just feel

Something special
Something real
Vibes of pleasure
Emanated a lot
Something still
Was perfect not
Sorrow perhaps
Somewhere deep
Outside was smiles
Yet heart weeped
I offered friendship
You took my hand
Yet never meant it
Thought it so bland
Without any reason
You’ve went away
Vibes of sad neglect
I’m captured today
Some vibes I felt
A burden on heart
Tried to remove it
Give a new start
Yet now I’m ailing
Loss I can’t explain
Vibes of neglect
Give me such pain
All wounds can heal
If the heart can try
You never did that
You said goodbye

Topic given by my colleague Shilpa again.

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

10 thoughts on “April 26th – Vibes”

  1. That was a lovely poem !! I am sure all of us could relate to this poem at some point of life !! I loved it , becaus eit reminded me of someone very special and close , yet your poem made me smile 😀

  2. I could very well relate to this!It does not happen all the time that all people we meet in this life, we can have a good vibes…:)But I am happy to have a good vibes with one person in blogville!Hopefully there would be no going away, no sorrows,no neglect, but good friendship offered must be nurtured to let it grow into a healthy friendship!Thanks for sharing this poem!

  3. Good query Brosreview, I'm wondering the same as well.. perhaps, not.. perhaps, maybe.. can't say for sure anymore! 🙂

  4. Arti, sometimes, that happens.. when words we've never read before remind us of someone in our past.. glad u liked it! 🙂

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