Tell me…
What did I do wrong?
Did I ever shout?
Make you feel left out?
Make you feel left out?
What did I do, friend?
That in our friendship,
You now doubt.
You now doubt.
Tell me…
What did I do, friend?
Did I in your secrets pry?
Ever make you cry?
Ever make you cry?
What did I do wrong?
That you have gone away,
Without saying goodbye.
Without saying goodbye.
Tell me…
What did I do wrong?
Did I forget to say,
I love you every day?
I love you every day?
What did I do, friend?
That you have left me,
In darkness this way.
In darkness this way.
Tell me…
What did I do, friend?
Was I not there,
When you were in despair?
When you were in despair?
What did I do wrong?
That you go away,
This is just not fair.
This is just not fair.
Tell me…
What did I do?
For you not to speak?
For you not to speak?
Your silence is my misery,
Just a few words I now seek.
Just a few words I now seek.
Please come back,
We can work things out,
We can work things out,
I can’t stay like this,
Forever in doubt.
Forever in doubt.
Come to me again,
Tell me my mistake,
Tell me my mistake,
Without your voice,
My heart does break.
My heart does break.
Come take my hand friend,
Can you not forgive?
Can you not forgive?
Without your friendship,
I just cannot live.
I just cannot live.
Tell me…
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
straight frm the heart….felt it!!:)
Most heart felt and sincere.Yvonne.
Oh, that made my heart break…been there before. Wonderful rhymes..as always.
I sense passion here. Passion is the only factor that makes one fight and not let go and work on something/someone that/who is dearly loved.
tell me how you play the tunes of my heart?
lovely dear..:)…nice look:) too…and the new name as well:)…
very well written!tell me,where did you get that talent and ideas from? :Dtell me!
Very well expressed…from the depths of ur heart…well..if that frnd of urs deserves ur frndship she's/he's surely get bak..else…moving on wud be the best thng to go :)tc
@Divsi,yeah, it was :)glad u liked it!
@Yvonne,thanks v.much! 🙂
@Raquel,i guess most of us have been…glad u liked it.
@Ajey,yes.. passion in both words & heart.. glad u liked it! 🙂
@Desi,i have no idea. 🙂 u do it with yours too! 🙂
@Tulip,thank u. glad u liked it! 🙂
@Pankhuri,donno dear! glad u liked it.. hehe!
@PJ,yeah.. i guess so! 🙂
Hmmmm a very very touching poem …yes , often the silence of friends hurt ..and all we are left with broken hopes swimming in the pool of questions..isnt it ?
@Arti,thank u! :):D yes it does hurt a lot when friends are silent! 🙂
Oh wow! What a friendship!Tell her, your friendship matters so much!Tell her, oh, just tell her!Good morning!
@Amity,it might be a little too late for that…