Questions many
Silently approach frantic mind
Questions many
Without answers, hard if any
Reply is must, I have to find
Without answers, I travel blind
Questions many
Form: Rondelet
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
hmmwhat is rondelet..? im sorry if i dont know it >.<but your poem is really nice..:) love the repetition and the rhymes 🙂(ps. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)
@Ayu,rondelet is a poetic form, 7 lines with 4-8-4-8-8-8-4 syllable format and the 4syllable lines with refrain.also has a rhyme scheme going a-b-a-a-b-b-aits ok if u didnt know it 🙂 its my first rondelet too. glad u liked the repetition & rhyme..will drop by ur blog soon 🙂
I liked this, you always seem to come up with something different.Well done,Leo.Yvonne.
@Yvonne,idle mind is devil's workshop, i tht i'll keep mine active with experiments :Dglad u liked it! thanks! 🙂
wahhaa! really nice x)loved it 🙂
very nice 🙂
Hmmmm ..some questions better remained unanswered ..ryt ???Nice poem .and yeah learned again a new form of poem 🙂
Hey great post! It always amazes me how you poets 🙂 manage to come up with poems so easily…I really wish that I could do that myself…I can do the first few lines pretty easy and then I start to have problems…is there a secret…lol…have a great day!
Very Much True 🙂 🙂 Excellent Write Up 🙂 🙂 Vinay, Its No Surprise That, If In Few Days/Months If I Come Across Your Books In Market….You Would Definitely Dip In The Pool of Praising Readers 🙂 :)Wish You All The Very Best Success 🙂 🙂 Take Care 🙂 🙂
A very interesting style!
@Ajey,indeed it is! 🙂
@Shriti,thanks v.much! 🙂
@Shilpa,glad u like it! 🙂
@Arti,another style for u to experiment with eh?! 🙂
@Shannon,hehe.. i blv any1 can write poems.. just need to be flowing i think! 🙂 glad u like it..
@Sahana,hehe.. mostly the no. of praising readers would dip… hehe.. 🙂
It's great reading your write up after such a long time.. Nice..Cheers Bro.
@Shiv,don't remember u dropping by b4.. but i can't be sure! glad u liked it! thanks!
Questions make us conquer our weaknesses….:)Let there be questions and find answers to it, in that way, life would be an exciting journey!
@Amity,amen to that ma'am! 🙂