I’m no oracle
I’m no seer
To tell future
Get to it near
Read the omens
Mask my mind
In these eyes
Heart you find
Destiny I know
Waits for me
Yet not time
For me to see
Just I go on
Trying and true
Future appears
Clearly in view
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Hello there!Thanks for following my blog.Nice poem. :)Cheers,Annie.
A great verse Leo,Yvonne,
:)Lovely words.
nicely written..!!!
Woww!!!!! Beautiful Lines Leo 🙂 🙂
Nice one! I love how the last word of a sentence rhymes with the last word on the sentence 2 lines down!
Oh… my…WOW! That was pretty good. I don't prefer poetry, but that was good. I'm going to be hanging around.
I think this one is my favorite.
@Annie,thank you for liking the poem and coming to my blog & reading! twas a pleasure following ur blog too! hope to see u around more..!
@Yvonne,thank u, glad u liked it! 🙂
@Aayushi,thanks a lot! 🙂
@Yamini,thank u very much! 🙂
@Sahana,thanks a lot! 🙂
@Rosh,heya, long time no seeya! welcome back! glad u liked it, and yeah, more of my poems use that abcb rhyme 🙂
@Wolfie,welcome here anytime dudette, thanks for following 🙂 glad u liked it…
@Raquel,this overtook the canary? 🙂 😉 wow, glad u liked it and fav-ed it 🙂
Liked it!rosy mask
Love the opening line: I'm no oracle". There is a beautiful humility, a sense of wonder right there in just a few words! And then the idea of "mask" becomes like a powerful persona!
@Gautami,thank u v. much! 😀
@Gemma,thank u.. glad u liked it, and tht the mask becomes like powerful persona! 🙂
So very true !! How often we all want to take a sneak view of our future , when we are the one who create it !! Nice poem yaar ..simply true , with words few !! 😀
@Arti,thanks! 🙂 glad u liked it…
Punchy and lively style. Enjoyed that.
@Anthony,thanks v.much! 🙂
Well said, my friend. Thank you.
nice1 Leo..written wid a gr8 zeal..nice readin u..can't afford 2 miss ne more..:)
Your poem has a very nice flow to it. For some reason I am thinking of an old Blood, Sweat and Tears song. Go figure. I also like the first line "I'm no Oracle". And, if only the future were that clear. Well done!
@Sandy,thank u too! 🙂
@Mads,is that relly u? thank god, missed u here yaar! 😀 thx and glad u liked it! 🙂
@Loch Rob,yes, if only.. if only..thank u! 🙂
beautifully written verses… reading you after a long time… it was refreshing 🙂
Its nice, Leo. Isn't it nice to hide behind your eyes, just let the good 'you' come through…Yes, this was a Halloween party costume the Mrs. Jim came up with. I hesitated using it because everything is masked, masks we tend to think of mask our countenance…
Lovely verses as always Leo. Nicely written.
So many possibilities, it can be difficult to choose – until experience, hopefully, points us in the right direction.
@Rajlakshmi,thank u.. welcome back here :)glad u liked it..!
@Jim,thanks v.much, glad u liked it! :)u both looked really halloweeny 😀
@Katina,thanks! 🙂
@Stan,exactly! 🙂
I like the flow of this as well as the words.
Nicely done…what happens, happens…
@Tammie,thanks! 🙂 glad u liked!
@Patti,yeah.. absolutely! 🙂
Yes, but why mask your mind?Only you will know why!Thanks for supporting my prompt at OSI through this challenging thoughts you shared!
@Amity,thank u… only i know indeed..!