Failures, victories
Yet sense of joiedevivre
Knowing joys await
Captive in feelings
Yet sense of joiedevivre
Seeing freedom close
Broken threads of hope
Yet sense of joiedevivre
Sees light after rain
How we think matters
Positive thoughts yield results
Joiedevivre waits
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Beautiful :))Sorry I wasn't regular for a while cause of exams :)BTW How r u?
It's all being positive for every storms in life…and that way, happiness joiedevivre will be achieved!It's an inspiring poem altogether!Liked it! Thanks for sharing
It's all being positive for every storms in life…and that way, happiness joiedevivre will be achieved!It's an inspiring poem altogether!Liked it! Thanks for sharing.
Vinay, I Attempted For Tale #2. Check It Out In MY Blog!!!!!
Vinay, Excellent Write Up π π
love the repetition..nice writing π(ps. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)
Positivity is the key word to all situations in life.Loved the write,Yvonne,
Great job!
Dear Vinu,Good Evening!Well expressed as usual!Hey,it's raining in your city now!Right?Lucky,yaar!It's too hot here.Now,try write about the maddening smell of the mud after the first showers!Wishing a Wonderful and Prosperous VISHU! Sasneham, Anu
Do you think you can use any word in a poem? How about canary?
@Shriti,no issues dear. glad u liked it. hope ur exams went well! π
@Amity,thank u! glad u liked.
@Amity,rptd cmt.
@Sahana,thank u! π
@Sahana,will check out soon dear.. promise…caugght up with work right now
@Ayu,thanks! will come soon..
@Yvonne, agreed.. thank u! π
@Wanda,thanks! π
@Anu,yes, it rained in Bangalore, albeit for just fifteen mins or so π will take u up on ur suggestion soon!
@Raquel,sure, i guess any word can be used in poetry; the effect of the word however isn't guaranteed always.canary? yeah sure., will take it up! π
I love this!I think joiedevivre gets the award for most creative use of the letter J as well. π
@Melody,thank u! glad for the award! π
you are the king of words
@Desi,lol. no ways.. no king.. not royalty at all.
Vinay ,amazing !! I really loved it !! A simple message brought out so beautifully ! As melodygreen says , this was the best J in this challenge !! π
@Art,thanks dear. i am glad that it came out well! π
Please take me some classes about how i should improve my writing with every post….please…you are awesome poet vinay…you are different..!!!Nicely written..!!!
@Yam,:P ur darn awesome urself darlin! :)dont need my classes for sure! π