Old faith
Felled by failure
Lies filled with agony
Reincarnation desired
Again
Elusive hope reincarnates
Capturing self belief
Will to move on
New faith
Form of Choice: Butterfly Cinquain
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Cinquain….wow…its been ages that i read one….and writing tho already forgot..!!!beautifully written friend…!!
A beautiful poem, the words are magical, suffused with lyricism and imagery.
Man of many words, another good blog.Yvonne.
Very nice indeed! So glad you are apart of this challenge, glad to have found you, now I am a follower!
Good post!
This is very good indeed!
So true ! Wonderfully written …:) i wonder how you catching my thoughts ? I was about to write on Faith , but then didnt ..you know telepathy 😛 but a very beautiful piece Piece I must say ..few words yet indepth meanings 🙂
typical words 😐
Beautiful Inspiring Words 🙂 🙂 Wish You All The Very Best Success For Challenge 🙂 🙂
beautiful work of art done in words…:)inspiring, the will to carry on after failures… 😉
@Yami,i keep changing forms. don't like sticking to one, though i think ur free style is wonderful! 🙂
@Sam,thank u very much! 🙂
@Yvonne,thanks!! 🙂
@Shannon,thank u! 🙂 😀 welcome to my followers list!
@Wanda,thank u! 🙂
@Aj,thanks! 🙂
@Arti,thanks thanks! 🙂 u could have written on faith..it'd have been wonderful too..! 🙂
@Shriya,thanks very much! 🙂
@Sahana,thanks u very much! 🙂
@Amity,thank u! 🙂
I enjoyed this piece. Short but thought provoking. J.H.
@JH,thanks! glad u liked it.