
My cry, do you hear?
See these silent tears?
You love me so much
Yet you hurt me such
Your hands they caress
Stroke my golden tress
Yet when you do strike
Gifts pain, hurt alike
You once held me dear
Nowadays, you I fear
Leave my life now alone
You destroyed my home
Each dream I had got
Now they remain forgot
I hate because of you
You never loved me true
No more I dream to fly
Lost in darkness, I cry
Oh, that's so sad, but beautifully done.Lee
Very sad but beautifully writtenYvonne.
@Lee,thank u! π
@Yvonne,thanks.. yeah, it is real sad tat it happens..
Sadly beautiful !!!I loved most of your lines esp the : gifts pain , hurt alike .dunno y but i liked them !!
a perfect piece for child abuse…but it's sad…so sad…
You're very talented!
@Aarti,thanks! π its the depth that attracts i guess! π
@Amity,child abuse is sad..
@Wanda,thank u!
very nicely written….sad but beautiful..!!
@Yami,thanks dear!
"Lost in darkness, I cry"So sad, so painful. Why, why, why??
@Margaret,i really donno π