Withers on slight touch
Next day, blossoms yet again
Reincarnates same
Avatar of perfection
Reincarnates same
Withers again on slight touch
Blossoms next day same
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Beautiful flow of words,Yvonne.
A like this. A great take on reincarnation.
That was just beautiful, though it was about a touch-me-not, it seemed to be about much more than just that! Really loved it!
Liked. A great take. On a complete different note; I scroll bars on your web page does not work in chrome. Don't know why ?
perfect for this prompt!
A Naisaiku?You depicted a unique avatar…Touch-me-Not is a plant that has kept me wondering why for every fragile touch, its leaves close.Sometimes our personality is like that – we seem to be sensitive at times with the outside world and would prefer to return and hide into our shell to protect ourselves – a natural instinct.A perfect avatar of human nature!
Nice form for this! Delightful.
I enjoy the repetition in this, it invites me to take it in more deeply.
wow .. i love the line "avatar of perfection" ! 🙂
Nice job! I love the idea of an avatar of perfection, and you seem to have found it.
@Yvonne:thanks! 🙂
@Anthony:a perfect avatar of reincarnation, isn't it? 🙂 thanks a lot!
@Aayushi:it can be more than just a touch-me-not.. i mean, we people are kind of touch me nots at some time in our life na 🙂
@BlueMist:thanks! 🙂 yeah, i donno y either.. because the scrolling works, just the bars dont!
@Four WInds:thanks! 🙂
@Amity:yes, u got it! 🙂 thanks a lot! 😀
@Tumblewords:thanks! 🙂
@Tammie:thank u! 🙂
@Shriya:thanks a lot!:)
@Robin:i did?! thanks!! 🙂
Mmmm…. Beautiful. Life insists on itself.
like your take on the prompt – nature is so magnificent!
The cycles of life, brought alive through your words. Nice.
Delightful read 🙂
I liked your 'touch me not' avatar because I learned what they were and how they 'operate.'..
I too learned a lot here. My green thumb isn' even blue. :)..
@Sandy,thanks very much! 🙂
@JP,thank u.. yes, it is very magnificent! 🙂
@Rob,thank u! 🙂
@Reka,glad u liked! thanks! 🙂
@Mrs,thank u! 😀
@Jim,thanks! 😀 hehe!
Loved the reetition of this- it works on so many levels and in many ways!
exquisite sensitivity and resilience.
@Patti,thanks! 🙂 glad u liked it!
@Gabrielle,thanks very much! 🙂