Some thoughts bottled up
Placid mind begins agitation
Escape now is necessitated
Answers to urgent queries
Keeps eluding our quests
Instigated by such emotions
New words become free
Giving expression to thoughts
Ornate and descriptive style
Underlining our urgent need
To express deepest desires
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Vinu, this was so beautiful.. Yes, we do speak out when our mind has thoughts that needs to escape.. When it stays so long, we get frustrated na..
"ornately done and with vivid description"this sure will be a hit at AO… :)it's very challenging to write the prompts…one prompt and comes out so many thoughts!great Leo! I am positive you have a great chance here!
I now know for sure i am losing out on this acrostic and i love it as its from :)This was truly beautiful 🙂
I think it does one good to speak out now and again, to supress ones emotions is not good.Loved the poem very tastefully written.Yvonne.
wow! nice :))
lovely 🙂
beautifully expressed… haven't tried acrostics yet… may be I should also give it hand :)lovely write 🙂
Fabulous acrostic…I like how you captured the power of the voice struggling to speak out. Nicely done.
@Anu:yeah, very true dear. we do speak out in frustrations & confusions more than when we are happy also… coz sharing that frustration eases our load na? 🙂
@Amity:i hope it shall be too..! 🙂 thank u. glad u liked this! take care.
@Scribz:thanks! 🙂 glad u liked it!
@Yvonne:thanks for ur praise! 🙂 glad u liked it!
@Shriti:thank you!!: )
@Shriya:thank you very much!:)
@Rajlakshmi:sure.. why not? 🙂 u can do it! give it a try!
@Katina:thank u very much! 🙂 struggling mind does yearn to voice its thoughts! 🙂
Spoken like a poet.
@Amias:thank yu! 🙂
Very nicely written
@Ofira:thank u very much!
Nice work Leo..!!
@Yami:thank u!