Barren lands
Scorched by
Fiery glances
Lie desolate
Calm breeze
Hesitates to
Touch their
Arid lips now
Scorched by
Fiery glances
Lie desolate
Calm breeze
Hesitates to
Touch their
Arid lips now
Soothing dew
Stays away
Hesitates to
Ease the pain
Nourish not
Flourish not
Nothing grows
Lost, a rose
Prayers now
For His grace
Let no longer
He hesitate
Life depends
Gifts He to us
Wait continues
For joyous hues
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
beautiful Leo 🙂
What a trying situation and time and with much hesitation we await for a hope, though it would only be a very thin thread of hope….My heart goes to those who are sadly affected. May God be not selfish enough to pour upon us His bountiful blessings to keep His people away from famine…:)A sad symphony but beautiful rendered Leo!
Touching and beautiful, Leo. The pain is palpable.
Wow Leo this was really good. The words are really beautiful and tender.Have a nice day.Yvonne.
We do receive so many gifts from His grace. Your poem is deep in meaning and has me thinking this morning. Very nice.
hiie..logging here after quite long tyme..rlly nice 2 c yr new theme..lukin so gudd Leo..n dis was a b'ful attempt..yr wrds can be felt..nice lines.:)
so well written…quite moving…loved it…
@Shrithi:thanks dear! 🙂
@Amity:exactly. we await hope, but with hesitation in such a situation! thank u!
@Sandy:thank u very much! 🙂
@Yvonne:thanks very much! 🙂
@Loch Rob:yeah, we do recv lot of gifts from Him, but still, sometimes that hope we ask with hesitation! thank u! 🙂
@Maddy:work shouldn't keep away from friends, be it real or virtual! 🙂 missed u yaar! thank u! 🙂
@Aayushi:thanks a lot! 🙂
Hi LeoAMAZING post :-)My compliments …..
Very powerful–both the words and their presentation.
Hello Leo;I've passed an award to you!Please claim it in my blog…and pass the same…and sure u'd add it in your slides of awards…:)Have a great week ahead!
This makes me think of all the things I take for granted, expect, demand.
Very well expressed, Leo!
@Anya:thank u! 🙂 nice to see u back @ my blog! 🙂
@Robin:thanks very much!! 🙂
@Amity:yeah, sure.. will collect and put in slideshow..i'm not good at selecting friends for awards. its not fair to give one, and its not true if i give all! so passing won't be possible! :)thanks for the image of appreciation! 🙂
@Stan:yeah.. doesn't it? 🙂 have a gr8 week ahead sir! and dont have to repost this.. u got a technical error thats all. happens sometimes in blogger! 🙂
@Virgin Author:thanks very much! 🙂
Beautiful words, with a photo that makes the heart ache with compassion. Very touching poem!
Woww 🙂 🙂 So Beautiful!!!!!!!
Touching piece!
@Sweetest In The Gale:thank you very much! 🙂 glad u felt that compassion thats much needed for some!
@Sahana:thank u! 🙂
@TumbleWords:thank u! 🙂
even in a dry downpour there is life worthy of living…only in the waiting looking forward do we find our thirst quenched yes, no?? … a beautiful poem worthy of deep consideration
@Pie:yeah, very true.. depends on how u see the cloud isn't it? 🙂
such yearning for the Hope~ many different levels to this poem…thanks~
@Patti:thank u! 🙂 🙂
compassionate and tenderly writtenLeo.
Sometimes the wait is lonely and long in this desolate place, so tenderly rendered. Whether of spirit or body, may the thirst be quenched.
@Mia:thank u very much! 🙂
@Gabrielle:amen to that! 🙂