Chaste blossom fallen
Her modesty charred
Invoked help ignored
Leaving captured in
Devious predator’s trap
Affectionate hands attack
Breaking precious dreams
Under dark shadows
She withers away
Escaping living death
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Touching Picture With Touching Lines!!!! Very Well Written Leo!!!!!
that was really a hard hitting post… its so sad to see these little creatures suffer so much… and that too at the hands of some one who is trusted…brilliantly written…
A very all to common problem of today's society tastefully written like only you could write.Yvonne.
awww…thats so true and so touching 🙂
Very sad reality!Wish we could do something here…to these poor and helpless victims!Great start at AO!
Really touching T_T
Very touching Leo. I have to give you a big WOW!
this a very nice topic for acrostic poems..:3
See… when I read your poem first I said its touching and many out here have said the same thing.. 😀 Sowmiya's judgement is always perfect 😀 What more you want from me??? I can't think of anyother word lee :DLuv,Meow Meow 😛
Guys.. I CHOSE THE PIC.. so credit goes to me OK??????????
Very touching poem and picture. I wish we can do more about the abuse of children. They are our future.
@Sahana:thanks very much… its a sad case these days na! 🙁 so many blossoms get hurt.
@Rajlakshmi:ya… really sad to see these angels being mistreated by their own kith and kin! 🙁
@Yvonne:true. common problem it is 🙁
@Shriya:thanks! it is sad reality!
@Amity:so very true! thanks!
@Shriti:thanks!
@Amias:thanks for the wow! 😀
@Ayu:yes indeed!
@Miya:yeah, very great judgement da! thank u!
@Miya:aama ama, credit ellam unakke thaan! 😀
@Myun:Thanks! 🙂
Poem has a natural flow to it and that pic is priceless.
@Ofira:thank you. hope it is productive in the long run and people stop abusing children…
Leo..its perfectly written..but yes, we can never express in words the pain the children go thro'…!!!
@Yami:no, that can never be done…