My day seems incomplete without the usual wake up call from mom. That shout to arouse me from my land of dreams is filled with love as much as irritation, and heeding that love I open my eyes immediately to see her staring down at me with a glint in her eyes.
“You’re getting late, come on now, OUT OF BED”, she yells. Laughing, I pursue her order. In around twenty minutes, I’m ready to start my day.
“First go pray; then only breakfast. We should be thankful for what He has given us”, she says. I give her a kiss and go pray to God. Afterward, I butter up few slices of bread and eat quickly.
“Are you done already? No. Sit down. I’m not leaving you till you eat some more” her caring words come.
“Mom, I’m in a hurry today. I’ll eat something from canteen”, I reply and taking my bag, head off to work. When I reach office, I remember something I have forgotten. I call back home. “What have you forgotten?” she asks, quickly cutting to the chase.
“I forgot to say that I love you”, I reply and imagining her smiling face, I cut the call and start work.
Lots of times, I have fought with God for taking my dad away from mom and me, but she has never let me feel a lack of that love, or shared her pain with me. I feel I am blessed with a mother like her.
“You’re the best, Mom”, I say to her everyday. “I love you loads and I know you love me a lot too. That’s beautiful. We might be only two, but we’re the best family.”
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
woww..dat was so sweet n short..luvlyy story..truly depicting the mom's love..great job done..:)
sorry for your father but happy again you have loving mom with you.yes, you r the best family
Beautiful. :)Kisses.
Oh my, so very touching story about family…now I miss my two kids who are away from me coz of college…but anyways, i just receive a morning text from them, telling me they miss and love me so much…:)You made me cry here, really, honestly!Write some more of this kind, you have the magic to make us feel sad…:)Now some questions had lodged at the back of my mind…i wish for some answers….:)
Lovely little story, Vinay :)wishes, devika
so nicely written bro :)..urs..hemu..
I loved this Leo, as family to me is so very important.Yvonne.
pinkzz is bak :)btw nice post 🙂
God.. That so touching.Few more lines.. I would have certainly cried. :)Its beautiful :)May God Bless You Both :)Takecare of yourself n your mom 🙂
Small but beautiful account of love for parents which only a sincere and affectionate child can recount.
aww.youre mom is really a wondermom~!!
@maddy: thanks dear! glad u liked it! @sucharita di: hey, its fiction didi… my dad is very much around! 🙂 glad u liked the story..@LSL: thanks! :)@amity:thank u! 🙂 glad u liked this attempt!
@devika: thanks ma'am! :)@hemz: thanks!!@yvonne: thank u.. tis impt to me too!@shriya: long time no see dear. wr u been?! glad u r back n liked th post!
@satyu: glad u felt the emotion.its fiction satyu. its there in tags na.will take care of mom for sure tho! :)@saras: thanks sir! :)@ayu: that she is! 😀 thanks!
AWWWWWWWWWWWW!! Such a sweet post!! I loved it!
@nushy: thanks dear! 🙂
Leo, a beautiful and touching post she is a wonderful mum, lucky to have you, a smart and wise son with a beautiful heart.
@Auntie Sona:thanks very much! it's fiction though!
Wonderful sentiments here Leo, a very touching story. A son's loyalty is priceless.
@Amias:thanks very much! 🙂