Night dark dies away
Easel of fresh hope
Waits for our brush
Desires renewed as light
Arrives showing the right
Way to yearned destination
Now it’s our time
Acrostic Only
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
very beautifully carved lines ..every night gives birth to a new dawn…nice acro..!!!
I must say that you are a great artist of words…Loved reading your work Thanks for your precious comment on my worthless poetry..You made my day..keep hopping..
You seem caught between day, night and rainbows….have been recurring in your writings lately :)anyway, a fine hopeful piece of writing, Vinay :)wishes, devika
beautiful hopes on a new dawn!nice work here Leo!
i love your figuratives here :3(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)
@maddy: thanks very much! :)@geeta: most welcome. glad u liked reading mine! thanks!@devika: its the acrostic only themes ma'am. so it seems recurring! 🙂 glad u liked though.@amity: thanks! :)@ayu: thanks! glad u liked it!
Yes, it's our time :)Nice writing!
@nushy: thanks! 🙂
I like the first part better than the last, and "our time" is good, but who is "our"?
@Amias:can't "our" be a general indication?new dawn can after all be for many, not just myself! a general voice i implied! 🙂