Love felt so divine
Yet commitment uncanny
Heart flies yet static
Haiku Bones
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
A big truth has been put in just 3 lines…. Loved it..
Such a few words Leo but they are words of impact, lovely to read.Yvonne.
True!
hey Leoonce again…all said within such a few words….and such profound meaning!wonderful!keep it up!God bless!
woOoOoOow!awesome 🙂
Fantastic.Beautiful Lines.
hmmmm a beating irratic heart…
How true, how true.Away they fly.Nice one.Melanie
@miya: true indeed! :)@yvonne: glad u liked it n felt it is impactful! :)@amity: thanks!@parzi: thanks dear! god bless! 😀
@shriti: thanks! :D@sahana: thanks a lot! :)@pie: thought provoking that!@melanie: thanks! 🙂
beautiful lines..well done leo.
@sona: thanks! 🙂