Emotions collide
States so quickly interchange
Chaos reigns in mind
One Single Impression
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
was thinking about you today morning, Vinay…so you were in chaos?? :)Now, see peace reigning in….thats how it works! :)wishes, devika
…weewwww….:)thanks ur back…:)and i know how chaotic it is, not bad, but it's too good son!may this be a start again of you being active writing again even just here at your Figments…:)
Nice 🙂
Good one, Leo.
Nicely penned – chaos could be a state of mind.
Yeah, that just about sums up the internal chaos that many of us can relate to.Nicely!!
wow!
yaa soo true… nice one leo
Chaos screaming, chaos dreaming, Gotta be more, gotta do more…just remembered this from 'Dead Poets Society'… Chaos is good!! :)aaanyway, see you when I see you… 😀
“Laughing, crying, tumbling, mumbling,Gotta do more, gotta be more.Chaos screaming, chaos dreaming,Gotta be more, gotta do more.”that's the whole part… couldn't leave it incomplete!! 😛
I think emotions can take us into chaos if not properly understood and managed. It is easy to get taken away by the moment. Your poem has me thinking about recent examples and how I might have thought differently.
wow! nice one Leo :))
Yes, Leo. And when we just begin to think we've figured it out the chaos picks up again with new change.Very nice…
lovely 🙂
hey ,,, after long time visiting logs .. how cud urs not be opened ?? nice haiku 🙂
I love the simplicity and power of each verse. Beautifully written Leo : )
I know the feeling. Wow. Well done.
so very true- especially about the colliding emotions; nicely done!
@Devika,sort of. chaos of new job maybe! :D@Amity,yeah, i hope so too! :)@Nuchu,thanks! 🙂
@Saras,thanks sir! :)@Tumblewords,it could be indeed! :)@Andy,lot of us can relate to it i think! 🙂
@Desi,thanks! :)@Pranav,lot of chaos in ur comment too! 😀 lol.@Pranav, glad u left it completE! :)see ya when i see ya 😀
@Lochrob,yeah, they can, and they usually do too! :)@Shriti,thanks! :)@Jim,yeha, true what u say! 🙂
@Equidae,thank u! :)@Pratsie,glad mine was opened! 😀 thanks dear! :)@Katina,thanks! 🙂
@Sandy,thank u! :)@Patti,thank u! 🙂