Tears of blood we cry
Yet unmoved stay a few eyes
Indurated hearts
One Single Impression
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
How well you say it! humanity, then, has come down to this – indurated hearts, indeed! Wonder.. what started it all?..
Awesome! ^_^
oh wow…loved it'yet unmoved stay a few hearts'killer line
Harsh and beautiful,
…sad!what makes our hearts indurated is when we are often hurt by people we so much loved, people who are important to us but don't see or feel it!
A person has to do what it takes to protect the heart…well done:)
Leo,I have decided not to post any more at Blogs where my comment has to be approved befored it is posted.I shall miss reading your works.Maggie:)
In many ways I feel most sorry for those who don't feel.Great words.
Awesome ! ^_^keep writing,will keep visting :)take care 🙂
:).Amazing one vinay..
Are people that busy, they cannot take the time, turning away because they don't know what to do, or maybe just don't care. Caring and showing compassion is one of the rewards of life.
Wonderful one Leo, I'm speechless.Yvonne.
Amazing it is that some can remain unmoved.
There are too many hardened hearts in this world…this was beautifully put.
The inability to feel another's pain is end of humanity….but then, this too is a reality more often….out in the streets, we see it so often!wishes, devika
In defeat lies Defiance, Leo. Blessed are those who don't feel pain. Excellent Post dear.
Excellent one! Keep at it!
Very nice – truly written.
aww..this seemed 2 b perfect..well done.!
Very powerful… your 3 lines are …
It evokes a sadness inside me. You have a beautiful ability with words. And I loved the picture that you put with the poem.
unmoved, untouched…
Beautiful. You say it all and so nicely. Well done.Melanie
what has hardened their hearts so as to not recognize the salt of their own blood?
Leo how just tell me how can u write just 3 lines but still make a gr8 impact on d readers…wow…
ah!! a dark take 🙂
@Dark Lord,yeah. indurated indeed! :)@Shriti,thank u! :)@Freelancer,killer line?! 😀 lol! thanks bro.@Nathalie,thank u! :)@Amity,i don't understand why hearts have to be hardened though! :(@Maggie,we gotta do what we gotta do. i shall miss u here at my space too friend! but i cannot remove moderation! 🙁
@Anthony,feeling for those who don't feel. so true! :)@Sunakshi,welcome to my blog! 🙂 glad u liked. keep visiting!@Prams,thanks :)@Rob,it is indeed one of the rewards! :)@Yvonne,thank u! :)@Sandy,thank u! 🙂
@Gale,thanks! 🙂 glad u liked.@Devika,end of humanity.. so true! :(@Saras,to not feel pain is sad, to not see others pain is even sadder at times. glad u liked the take!@Ajey,thank u! :)@Tumblewords,thanks! :)@Mads,perfect?! lol 😀 thanks!
@Miya,thanks! :)@Eva,the pic is gone now, but glad u appreciated the words! 🙂 thank u!@Pie,thanks! :)@Melanie,thank u! :)@Gabrielle,thanks! :)@Tweety,i donno. but i know u can do it too!@Pratsie,a necessary dark take i think! 🙁 sad how true it is at times too…