Never leaving home
My nomadic mind travels
Back to distant past
Unraveling the future
Desiring so much
Never giving up trying
It travels so fast
Like with wings it is flying
Captive yet so free
No bonds can restrain its flight
None can clip these wings
One Single Impression
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
its a very nice take Leo..i jus liked it..rlly,it seems as mind has some wings attached,which leads to what nt thoughts..:)
I like this Leo, especiallythe last half.Most minds run with the windyours flies with wings. I tellMrs. Jim that my mind is alwaysworking, always active. I wish it had wings like your poet's…
mind has wings…it can soar as fast as it can, as free as it can, as high as it can…:)if i could only have wings like an eagle and fly high up in the sky…that would be magic…:)Vinu, I like ur signature here…very beautiful…!Peace now, sorry if I offended u a while back!
nice sweet n simple..!!!beautifully done dear..!!!
A very happy new year to you.. A lovely way to kickstart the new year, with this wistful and dreamy poetry!
We fly, yet in some way we are tethered. I liked this poem very, very much.
This was beautiful…what a wonderful take on the prompt.
Indeed none can clip these wings
on the wings of the mind…lovely poem Leo.
Nicely done Leo. Traveling within the mind, has no limits. There's not much that can restrain where our thoughts go.
My mind has worked like this – but for me the desiring part usually doesn't feel so good… Perhaps I just haven't flown on wings as big as yours. Much to consider here…
a dreamer paradise – to fly freely, I like the last line very much
nice 🙂
keep your mind's wing unclipped!
Nicely done! Lots to think about.
very nice- I love where the mind can take us! Unimited access…
Limitless where an unfettered mind can take us. Thank you for this affirmation.
i love your take leo, its wonderful..you do not talk to me any more…are you angry with me?
Breezy style and very good narrative skill. Loved it Leo.