Fought bravely, but lost
Death is with pride, not regret
Fallen warrior
Haiku Bones
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Gorgeous haiku. Reminds me of Kate & Anna McGarrigle's tremulous version of Stephen Foster's Was My Brother in the Battle on the PBS Civil War TV series.
Beautifully put!
timely, and beautiful.angie
Nice work, yes!
a hero….great one Leo…:)haiku work is also your forte!
Short and sweet but with full meaning ….
gr8 job! ^_^
wow…that's a lovely haiku…very well expressed!a good piece of work Leo!well done!keep it up!
To Bruce,thanks a lot! 🙂 your haiku bones site is quite nice.. 🙂
To Sweetest,thanks very much! 🙂
To Angie,thanks very much! 🙂
To Tumblewords,thank you! 🙂
To Amity,thank you! :)glad you felt so!
To Miya,thanks very much! 🙂
To Shriti,thank you very much! 🙂
To Parzi,glad you liked it! 🙂
So true!a startAlso don't forget to post any of your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited!
well done!
Timely, yes, but also timeless & universal. Perfect.
To Robin,thanks! 🙂
To Debra,thanks a lot! 🙂
To Gautami,thanks! 🙂