Confined to self thoughts
Despair seems my companion
Hope unseen stays far
Writhing with confined emotions
Buoy I now need
Stay afloat in this thick mire
Small slip from grasp
I shall sink with no support
Life without meaning
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Very well written.. u have pictured the situation well 😛 nice da 🙂
Vi, why such a sad piece?!should I be worried?
vry well said..i can see my life in it..lol..:)
i should be the one writing this piece, but i guess, i don't wanna let people know that I am into it…seems you have penetrated my inner self with this post of yours…
thats postivitely negative 😀 neat ! christmas greetings chekka 😀
THAT WAS REALLY NICEMerry christmas 🙂
A very good verse.Happy Christmas.Yvonne.
शब्दों का जादू !
Leo,This well expressed a most sad emotion … well done.
liked the expression. live in ur words, rise. its easy to drown. brother, stay safe and be happy.
This is one of your fine works. Keep it up!PS: Kindly visit my spot to help promote my friend's DJ'd compositions.
To Nuchu,thank u 🙂
To Cin,no, nothin to be worried of! 🙂 its fiction!
To Mads,thanks! 🙂
To Amity,its something all of us feel at one time or the other i guess!
To Shrav,merry christmas to u too! 🙂
To Shriti,many thanks! 🙂
To Yvonne,merry christmas 🙂 many thanks ma'am! 🙂
To Anil,really? 🙂 thanks very much!
To Maggie,sometimes, expressing sadness is the only way to ignite a lamp of hope! 🙂
To Anil,thanks bro! 🙂
To Ajey,that means a lot, comin from yu! 🙂 i'd visit ur space, but as usual, some problems. i don't know why ur space seems to vanish for just me 🙁
Very good verse! nicely written 🙂 Well explained! the pic is so good too! i love photography like it! :):) im glad to be bk on ur space!
To Sonu,thanks 🙂 glad u liked it. nice to see u back on my space too! 🙂