My thoughts may waver
But it shall not fall apart
Like spider’s web sways
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Ah, excellent! Keep writing!!!
Mine too, :)Nicely put, Vinay :)wishes, devika
Hi Leo;u seems in a hurry to take a vacation ha….:)i will of course link this one as soon as the prompt is up at OSI…:)enjoy ur vacation and have a grand and great time there…:)we will miss you here at blogsphere…:)
your words of wisdom made me go: ummmm
Back and forth like a ladder bridge in the breeze and the weight. I hope the ropes, rather webbing, holds.Very nice analogy here, Leo…
A very good take on the prompt Leo. Waver and Sways, yes. The reason why so many are caught in swaying spider webs is because at times the swaying render them invisible.
Awesome. Determination all the way!
Lovely words Leo.Yvonne.
Nicely written. This one has me thinking this morning.
I love the visual image you created here…wonderful. I can see that web blowing in the wind, refusing to fall apart. Powerful!
Hi Leo–Yeah, the subtlety and strength of those seemingly fragile strands…like thoughts, do form a band of steel which can be the prison we seek to escape!Many thanks!
ah!! quite a lot has changed here Mr.Poet but the poems are still going I see… nice :)See you when I see you… 😀
nice!
great one…dear where is my invitation?
And oh how they sway! Thanks for joining us this week.
🙂 🙂 Very Well Said 🙂 🙂
hah… cute write… put a smile on my face… may be cos I changed 'thoughts' into 'love' 😀 n msged it..
wow.. all the best to conquer ur mighty thoughts..:)
not a lot of words but very strong words. lovely Leo!
I like it! A neat conceit.
Thoughts have a way of swaying! Nice!
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hey vinu!!im back to blogging! do come by okay??missed everyone in blogsville!
Excellent poem, Leo…you said so much in so few words.A very enjoyable read.
And spider webs sway, but they are so sturdy as well…great read- and I love the photo
classic..even the blog too looks classy…everythin has teh beauty of a poetry here..
Its beautiful kano…
awesome!!loved it :))
Very nice words and images. Well done my friend.love, Melanie
this hit the right spot !! nice 🙂
Strength in vulnerability. beautiful visual metaphor!
"it shall not fall apart' stood out loud and clear. Good going Vi.
hey Leofirstly really sorry for being late…wasn't around sorrry!as for the post…wonderful imagery u have created….beautiful comparison…very nice!keep writing!God bless!
@Ajey,thanks very much! 🙂
@Devika,thanks very much! 🙂
@Amity,i wrote it 4 mins before going to vacation dear! :Dglad you liked it! thanks for linking it! 🙂
@Tammie,words of wisdome?! :)thanks such a lot!!
@Amias,thank you! :)yes, invisible it seems.. but it is so strong!
@Jim,i hope so too! :)glad u liked the analogy!
@Kaya,indeed! 🙂 i am determined!
@Yvonne,thank u! 🙂
@Rob,thanks a lot! 🙂
@Sweetest in the Gale,thank you! 🙂
@Beth P.,thanks very much! 🙂
@Pranav,that will never end bro! 🙂
@Sawan,thanks! 🙂
@Shraddha,was on vacation dear. will send u asa i get your email id! 🙂
@Sandy,thanks! 🙂
@Sahana,thanks very much! 🙂
@Ak47,thank u :)but i dint want it to be an SMS dude.
Prams,thank u!
@Equidae,thank u! 🙂
@Nancy,thank u! 😀
Shradds,thanks very much! 🙂
@Tumble,thanks! 🙂
@Mehroo,thanks! :)will drop by 🙂
@Maggie,thank you! 🙂
@Patti,thanks very much! 🙂
@Jiths,thank you! :)glad you liked it!
@Vasu,thanks kane! 🙂
@Shriti,thank u! 🙂
@Melanie,thank u very much friend! 🙂
@Pratise,glad you approved! 😀
@Gabrielle,thanks very much! 🙂
@Swapna,thank you Chechy! 🙂
@Parzi,don't be sorry. i wasn't around either 😉 :Dglad u liked it!
awsum…so appropriate it is..hats off..leo..!!!liked it the most…
@Mads,thanks! 🙂