“All that I am today, it is because of you. You always supported me. I wish you could come back to my side. You left because I offended you. I miss you darling. Sorry. I shall always love you.”
The wind blew tranquil through the lithe branches as I stood in front of her grave.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
How can she come back….But I think she is right there,….waiting for you to join! :)writing with chosen words must be fun, no?? another exercise which reminds of school days….anyway, nicely written :)wishes, devika
Well written!Beautiful and awwww! – Nuchu
Nicely done at the end there.
for just offending her, she left you forever? and why you are in her grave? is this fiction or real?well, it says fiction…:P
Very Well Written.
You work the same magic with prose as you do with poetry!
Nicely written, these pieces with limited words come out rather well! They say so much in few lines! was missing from ur blog for a while! sorry! 🙁 am back now for abt two weeks or so! 🙂
I like the gravity of it…gravely offended
@Devika,maybe she is waiting for him ma'am! :)and yes, it is sort of fun! :Dreminds me of school indeed!
@Nuchu,thank u! 🙂
@Anthony,thanks a lot! 🙂
@Amity,if it says fiction, it is fiction! :Phe's at her grave coz he misses her. remembers her! 😛 and yeah, offense can be rude at times!
@Sahana,thanks very much! 🙂
@Nikki,glad u feel so! 🙂 thank u very much!
@Sonu,thank u! :)welcome back to my blog space! :Dpleasure to have u around however long it may be for! 🙂
@Gautami,thank u! 🙂
small story packed with much feeling and emotion. Nice.
wow..that was awesome request..:) hope she returms back heh..:)
Powerful piece. Wonderful work.
Can't add much to what others have said. Thanks for such a tight, emotion-packed piece of flash!Well done!!
Nicely done!
no love deserves ds .. 😐
Good piece! To the point and straight from the heart! Well done!
nice one leo ..wonderful
A great presentation today. This was well put and just beautiful. A great read.
It sucks when we lose some1 bcas we did something. I know that feeling…
How can she not respond to such beautiful words. Best of luckYvonne.
अच्छा लिखते हैं आप, एहसासों को बयाँ करना आपको बखूबी आता है.मेरी कलम – मेरी अभिव्यक्ति
Nice narrative, the last line did capture the heart.How are you Kunju?
@Swapna,thank you Chechy!am fine. h r u?
@Anil,dhanyavaad dost, aapke taareef sunkar accha laga. appke blog zaroor aaonga. thoda time deejiye! 🙂
@Yvonne,it was a call beyond life. one that cannot be responded to! 🙂
@PC,yeah. i know it too! 🙁
@Snow White,thank you! 🙂
@Wordvamp,thank you friend! :)glad u felt it great!
@Ajey,thank you very much!my acct seems to be havin some probs opening ur private blog bro, will get u a comment bonanza asa its fixed! 🙂
@Pratsie,true..
@Tumblewords,thanks very much!
@Crybbe,thanks very much 🙂
@Tim,thanks! 🙂
@Prams,she wont :(glad u liked it!
@Thom,thanks very much! 🙂
awe..wish she culd cum bak..nice write it was…
@Mads,she wishes it too 🙂