Show me the light
Rocks surround me
Each edge waiting
One wrong decision
My life will be gone
This journey is long
Yet these obstacles
They always remain
Uneasy to maneuver
In darkness’ depths
Blanket of light now
I yearn for in earnest
Like a ship stranded
Guide me once more
Be my lighthouse
Guide me past them
Guide me past them
My destination nears
One Single Impression
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
nice write Leo..liked yr words..twas thought provoking..!!!
you have to follow your heart… god doesn't want you dead.
Excellent Leo, well done.Yvonne.
The poem is good, imagination again running high, i guess :)But don't scare the readers, i know you are all fine, Vinay :)wishes, devika
a lighthouse of your feelings….let there be light to guide you on the right path!good morning Leo!
and wow.. that was wonderful 🙂
It's amazing how the light can help us navigate around the rocks in our life. Nicely done.
awesome..gr8 job leo :))
A worthy subject for the lighthouse prompt.
you echoed my feelings there .. 🙂
This is so beautiful. Thanks.
This one has great potential Leo, but the flow seems off to me, lines out of place.
We all yearn for that guidance and light. You expressed it beautifully.
oh..so beautifull 🙂
When we are stranded…it is wonderful to have the beams of a lighthouse to help us find the right way.
Wonderful poem that is full of feeling.
Oh, don't we wish for avoidance of the shoals. Nice write!
Fabulous Write Up 🙂 🙂
nice one dear..:)..keep posting
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A lover's cry .. is it ? Nice. Lighthouses look so surreal .. I was expecting an image too ..
heyyy Leo…how are you??????soooooooo sorrryyyyyyyy for being terribly late this time…..was really missing reading ur works…n its great to be back here…n i must say the new look of ur blog is awesome….!as for this post….repeating myself the billionth time…lovely….very well written n very meaningful….i guess i have missed onto a lot of ur works….will get back to them…n what about the cat chronicles did i miss onto any of those i just hope i havn't….anyway i'm back now….so loads of comments coming ur way n thank u sooooooooo much for visiting my blog even in my absence….i truly appreciate it…really very kind of u…thank uuuuuuuu!keep writing!take care!God bless!
Nicley written Leo- we were somewhat on the same wavelength (no pun intended)…yes we need the light of the lighthouses, don't we?
@Maddy,thanks a lot! 🙂
@Love,i know! he doesn't! :)following the heart is where its at! 🙂
@Yvonne,thanks very much! 🙂
@Devika,yes ma'am! imagination sort of running high! :Dmost of my readers know am fine too I think 🙂 glad you liked it! 😀
@Amity,Amen to that! 🙂
@Shrav,thank u! 🙂
@Rob,yes indeed, it is amazing! 🙂
@Shriti,thanks! 🙂
@Anthony,thanks sir! 🙂
@Prats,thanks a lot! 🙂
Sandy,thank u! 🙂
@Amias,is it? will improve on it for sure! thank you! 🙂
@Sweetest in the Gale,thank u! 🙂 glad you liked it!
@Gulshan,thanks very much dear! 🙂
@Maggie,it is indeed nice to have that lighthouse! 🙂
Tammie,thank u! 🙂
@Tumblewords,exactly!! 🙂 thank u so much!
@Sahana,thanks very much! 😀
@Tulip,thank you! 🙂
@Shrav,will visit! 😀
@Aria,dint find an image! 🙁
@Parzi,welcome back dear! glad you liked the new look and this little poem! you've missed some works, but not any chronicles… :)can't wait for the loads of comments! take care!
@Patti,thanks! :)we do need them at times! 😀