I was sleeping when I heard the cry.
I ran outside. Even in the dark, I could see her kicking, searching for her attacker. I was at her side soon, fondling her behind the ear.
“Calm, my dear…it’ll be okay now”, I said. She whinnied happily, as I gave her a sumptuous meal of hay.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Well done.I like what you've done here.
Nice twist at the end there.
A very sweet story, and you used the words seamlessly. Great read!
Cool. I didn't expect the ending.
I love horses! very nice I liked it a lot!
@Radio Nowhere,thanks very much! 🙂
@Anthony,thanks sir! 🙂
@Sweetest in the Gale,thanks very much! :)glad u felt that way!
@Thom,haha :)neither did i at first! 🙂
@Jenn,thanks very much!
it's a simple act of kindness and care that calmed down your horse? ermmm…am i right? seems one of your horses at farmville is being given life here…:)peace!nice one Leo!
Nice! ending was unexpected; 🙂
nice one leo..i too didn expect tat ending 🙂 🙂 you tel so much wit just few words 🙂
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I liked this one. Totally unexpected.
short and unique! great job
Such a great twist, definatly not what I was expecting.
short nd sweet tale with nicely weaven words..:)
@Amity,u need to rest from farming! :Pu got nothin else on ur mind!
@JS,thanks! 🙂
@Suma,expect the unexpected! 🙂
@Amias,delighted to hear it! 🙂
@Angel,thank you! 🙂
@Illyria,thanks very much! 😀
@Wordvamp,thanks!! 🙂
@Maddy,thanks! 🙂