New
Life
Begins
Now today
Far away from home
Unseen city, unknown faces
Traveling with many expectations to fulfill
Migration seemed imminent
Quest for success starts
Destiny waits
Future
Calls
Me
Form: Fib-Reverse Fib combo
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
heyy..new life..migrating to new place..nice thoughts laid down..nice attempt to prompting..:)
that was one good attempt there sirji 🙂 felt good reading..
that was one good attempt there sirji 🙂 felt good reading..
Fabulous Lines Leo 🙂 🙂
i identify with this…good one..
An intriguing poem there… no less, that fascinating tangible structure! 🙂
So that's how it feels! It also gives insight as to why birds return to the place they were last residing.I do like the shape (form) of your poem as well. Thank you…
To me in this city, far from my home…each day is as new as I reached here on November 29, 1997 –13 years….and they flew like a shot in the air :)Nicely put…and my best wishes, Vinay whatever this migration might mean to you :)wishes, devika
really nice :))
To me each new day represents a new life beginning.Loved the post,Yvonne.
An exciting time well portrayed.
nice work 🙂
Great visual migrating flight seen here in this poem.I enjoyed the read.
Delightful. The strange combination in the picture speaks to the mystery in the poem. Wonderful.
This was wonderful, and I love the physical form your poem takes. Beautiful photograph!
nice one vinay :)liked it a lot :)very well said.. :)keep going friend 🙂
The anatomy of a career move aptly put. Moving is an opportunity for new challenges, experiences and a start. Great photograph too.
The anticipation in migrating so aptly captured….all the best for success sure waits for you.The flight and V formation of the geese added a great impact.
@Maddy,thank you! :)glad you liked it!
@Shravan,thank you sirji! :)glad u liked it and felt it was good! 😀
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@Sahana,thanks very much! 🙂
@Jim,yes.. home sweet home isn't it? 🙂
@Devika,ah.. time flies like that no matter where we are! :)thanks ma'am.. this migration, it won't happen for a while for me anyhow! 🙂
@Shraddha,i thought u would too! :)glad u liked it!
@Dark Lord,thanks..! the mirrored form is fascinating to me too! 😀
@Shriti,thanks! 🙂
@Anthony,thank you! 🙂
@Maggie,thank you friend! :)glad you enjoyed the read!
@Yvonne,yes.. each day, a new life does begin! 🙂
@Riya,thanks.. glad u liked! 🙂
@Snow White,thanks! 🙂
@Sandy,yes.. that pic does speak wonders, doesn't it? 🙂
@Sweetest in the Gale,thanks very much! glad u liked the poetic structure and the choice of photograph as well! 🙂
@Loch Rob,thank you! :)glad u liked my attempt at moving! 🙂
@Swapna,thanks chechy! :Dbut i'm not moving anywhere so fast! 🙂
Nice read Leo, we migrates to life, and that's a good thing.
Like the ending best, and the shape too.
Migration has become means to survive for so many people. Maybe we have turned to birds, without knowing?
Leo… this is so so true about Migration and very sweet 🙂
@Amias,true! :)glad you liked it!
@Jukota,thanks very much! 🙂
@Nathalie,yeah.. maybe so! 🙂
@Meow,thank u! :)can't wait for your take 🙂
perfect take 🙂
@Pratsie,perfect huh? :)thanks dear!
lovely like it a lot!
amazing
amazing
wonderful poem about new beginnings~interesting photo too.
@Melissa,thanks very much! 🙂
@Mixed Feelings,thanks! 🙂
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@Tammie,thanks very much! 🙂
Interesting photo and terrific form for this timely message.
@Tumblewords,thanks very much m'am 🙂
Hi Leo,I'm not sure if I commented on this poem but it is beautiful. You are an amazing acrostic. Thank you for your generous and kind comments on my site as well.
I really like the migration shape to the poem – well done.
Every moment is new. Loved the hope in this. Fly away home!
@Gabrielle,thanks ery much! :)am home.. dont wanna fly away so soon!
@Pam,thank u :)glad it shaped up well!
@Katina,no WG, you hadn't b4 :)but thanks for coming by!its not an acrostic really, but glad you liked it! thanks for the appreciation! 🙂
hope am not the last!your migration poem is really nice!having thoughts of doing the same like in your poem?good day Leo!
beautiful fib form and the foto fits fantastic!!!
@Amity,thanks very much! 🙂
@Piece of Pie,thanks very much! 🙂
Lovely!!
@Gauri,thanks a lot! 🙂