Life chained
Inside mind
By so many
Emotions now
Reasons echo
Are they true?
Tear the bonds
In our hands
Our freedom
Now resides
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
heyy..luvly acro…u've mastered the art..keep it up..:)
YES! THEY ARE!!!!
aww.. loved it :)gr8 job leo 🙂
Woww 🙂 🙂 Fantastic Fabulous 🙂 🙂
Wowie… this is great 🙂 and between, fantastic template 😀
ahh!Firstly when I click the page and it opened I was confused but the titled it helped thanks vinay for keeping it same the words i meant. to say anything to your poetry its just making sun see the light of a lighter i have so i wont be doing it.. 🙂 you know till nwo u r d best..Love you keep rocking keeep penning..
Liberation it is! Sometimes we want liberation from so many things! No need to mention them, delicate matters, they are.Your template design is new. I guess you read Amias' problems on blog skin? And I like it, too! Very much, far better than the last. Everything is readable. This is good Leo!Liberation from the not-so-readable old template eh!Very nice! The totality of it!
Our truth, like our freedom is relative….The absolute lies with God, nicely constructed, Vinay…have been reading the others too :)wishes, devika
Leogreat acrostic..
Lovely acrostic for liberation. It is certainly a matter of freeing ourselves from the chains of our mind. Nicely written.
this is lovely! thanks for passimng by my blog hope to see you again soon
@Maddy,mastered the art eh?! :)thanks very much dear!
@Nuchu,yes.. they indeed are! 🙂
@Shriti,glad you liked it dear! 🙂
@Sahana,thanks u very much! 🙂
@Meow,glad u liked it! :)i liked my template too! 😀
@Insi,confused because of the template change?! :)i dont change words! and please don't compare such! 😀 i'm not that best. i've to still improve i feel! :)glad u liked it! will definitely keep penning! 🙂
@Shraddhs,thank you! 🙂
@Devika,yes indeed ma'am! :)glad u liked it and good to see you here too! 🙂
@Amity,yes. no need to mention! so many things we want to be free from! :)yes, i noticed her post on reader friendly template.. i was gonna change b4 also.. so thought i would do it now itself! 🙂
@Write Girl,yes.. it is indeed! :)thanks for the praise!
@Melissa,thanks for stopping by mine too! :)will stop by again soon perhaps!
yet another one to join your classics dude… 🙂
Once again you have capured the mood. most enjoyable.Yvonne.
new template..cool..like it.. lovely acro..so thoughtful..im thinking..would love to discuss this with u later on..:)
tear the bonds, the illusion…simple and beautiful.
I was first captivated by the picture and then as I read your lines I thought how appropriate the two intermingled. Made for a solid read.
wow! Aptly described..
@Arv,thank u bro! :)glad u liked it!
@Auntie Sona,yeah, new template! :)glad u liked it!sure, we'll discuss later on! 😀
@Yvonne,thank you! 🙂
@Ben,thank you! :)glad u liked it!
@Vidya,thanks very much! 🙂
@Missy,the picture is enticing isn't it?!:)glad u liked it, and my words and that it intermingled! thanks! 🙂
lovely!!so true
@Orange,thanks very much! 🙂
Awesome work man… loved the thing 'life chained inside mind by so many emotions' line.. true that !!
@Ak47,thanks very much! 😀
I like this one too Leo. This is also a very old prompt, you did very well.
@Amias,yes, its an old prompt! but inspiration struck me only now! :)glad u liked it!