Hanker for a drink
People high become errant
Murky becomes sight
Driving with no direction
Death’s arms waiting now
Three Word Wednesday(Murky,Errant,Hanker)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
This leaves a sobering thought in one's mind. Well done.Glutton
waah…wht a take on wrds..b'fuly propmted leo..:)givin nice mssg..!!!
Love the last line. A vitally important message.
Yes, "Death's ares waiting now"…perfect.bhttp://torristravels.blogspot.com/2009/11/judge-for-iiiww.html
Incidentally, how did you get your signature at the end? That is so cool!b
If you read that and go drink drive you need your head read. Thanks Leo. Lovely.
Thom->thank u! 🙂 will do the 3ww bloghop soon! 🙂
Mads->ain't it an impt msg?! 🙂 thanks!glad u liked my take! 🙂
'never drink under the influence of liquor Leo'….death is just at the bend if you do!nice work!:)
oucch…'never drive' i should say, seems am the one intoxicated here…:)good afternoon Leo!
Anthony->thank u! a vitally important msg indeed! 🙂
B->thank you! will drop by urs soon! 🙂
B->oh that! 🙂 u can make it at My Live Signature site! 🙂
Tabitha->exactly! drink and drive? then possibly, no head might be left to get read!glad u liked my take!
Amity->hehe! 😀 i dont drink at all friend! :)good afternoon to u!
Amity->intoxicated by work? 😉 lol! 🙂
I like poems which have death in them!elbowing in, elbowing out
Gautami->u do? 🙂 i'm glad u liked it!
So true – well done!
Tumblewords->thanks very much! 🙂
hi leo.. so painfully too true… thrs nothin like a dd [designated driver] to keep everything right on the ride home… wisdom and insight are great friendz.. this comment has crashed a couple of times so scuse the repeat
Piece of Pie->yeah, its true isn't it?but not all have a DD for riding home.. :)it din't repeat anyhows!:)