Departed soul cries
Tears of joy when we succeed
Rain falls steadily
Image: Soul Teardrops by Fhrankee
For: One Single Impression-Departed
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
hey wow…:) True feelings and apt pic vinay…:)
its wow wow ๐
Its so so beautiful.. :)tODAY IS MY BIRTHDAY :))
Very nicely done, Leo. Rain, tears, and departing souls make for the elements of touching poems and sad novels…
very nicely done!!lovely image too
:))
Love that picture!a winter tale
Beautiful and deep words.
departed soul? that's too sad!….it's a way of giving in to our sad state…we cry…:)i love the rainfall, soothes my tired body and spirit like in a shower!:)
bowsthe pictures man, what great pictures!!in front of these, mine seem like insignificant dots..
The spirit world embraces us, and it's lovely when we recognize it.
Beautiful Fabulous Lines ๐ ๐
Great capture and images of true emotion. Nice picture and writing.
Prams->thank you! ๐ glad u liked it!
Miya->thank u ๐ i loved ur take as well!
Shriti->glad you liked it! :)wish you a very wonderful birthday dear!
Jim->thank you :)yes, they make for touching poems and sad novels. thankfully, i know to do just one of the two! ๐
Shraddha->thank u very much! ๐
Shravan->throat ache aano? just smile?hope u liked the take and smiling!
Gautami->glad u liked my choice of pic.hope the words were ok too! :)liked ur take on it as well!
Anthony->thanks very much sir! ๐
Amity->yeah, when they're happy with us, they shed tears of joy. thats the rain, or so it is said to be! ๐
Diwakar->thank u for that wonderful words of appreciation friend, but pictures arent my own! i write only the words. they form a picture themselves perhaps! ๐
Sandy->yes. it is lovely isn't it? ๐
Sahana->thank u very much! ๐
Loch Rob->thank you. glad u liked my take.thank you also for the inspiring prompt this week at OSI. ๐
mastering haikus..hmm..hmm..:) nice take leo…b'ful wrds wid deep meaning..:)
Powerful feelings conveyed with so few words…beautiful!
Heart felt words Leo, short but to the point.Yvonne,
quite effective..
Beautiful additions since my last visit, Vinay :)wishes, devika
very true words vinay ๐ you say so many things in just few words..really talented da :)loved it ๐
Our ancestors of all types are our biggest cheerleaders, I believe…Thanks for this beauty!!
this is very freeing :)http://floretacui.blogspot.com/2009/11/shoe-box.html
your simplicity is so charming!
Maddy->mastering? hehe.. i hope so.thanks! glad you liked it! ๐
Sweetest In The Gale->thank you! glad you liked it! ๐
Yvonne->thank you ๐
Aria->glad you feel so! ๐
Devika Ma'am->long time no see ma'am! hope u r fine!glad you liked the additions to it!
Suma->thank you dearest! :)you are talented too! glad you liked my words! ๐
Beth->yes indeed. they are some of our biggest cheerleaders indeed! glad you found it beautiful! ๐
Floreta->glad you found it so!thank you very much ๐
Desi->ah, so is yours too! :)glad you liked it!
I love the feel of this, the mystery… and the pic makes it even more special.
rain falls steadily…nice!!
Thanks for visiting my blog and giving me the link to your other blog (this one) where magic happens in the words you weave! Pleased to find you over here Leo :)I am having a love affair with haiku's at the moment. this was one, yeah? Beautiful.
beautiful one ๐
The soul knows no peace until it finds where it truly belongs. Only then can it cry tears of joy.A beautiful haiku Leo!
Straight n sweet…thnx for ur precious comments Leo
Shadowplay->glad you loved my words and choice of pic! ๐
Pratsie->hey, like this new avatar a lot! :)glad u liked my words!
Sandra->thank you.. ๐ long time no see!
Tabitha->oh, its my pleasure having u over here! :)magic in my words yeah? thanks a lot!yes, this was a haiku indeed. glad you liked it!
Margaret->exactly! ๐ glad u liked it Margaret!
Poorni->thank you for yours as well ๐
Leo,This was a different attempt style from you for the prompt.All three lines are so true.
Truly said – poignant piece!
very heartfelt.. beautiful..
Maggie->thank you! ๐ its a haiku.. one of my fav forms!i know, i usually am acrostic hungry na? ๐ ๐
Tumblewords->thank you very much! ๐
Auntie Sona->thanks ๐ its always nice seeing ur comment here!
DAMN TRUE!!! I love it!! – Nusrath
Nusrath->true isn't it?! :)glad u liked it! thanks!
Raindrops and tears/raindrops or tears. Sometimes it's hard to tell the difference! Nice!
Jukota->yes.. espcially if u are crying in the rain! ๐
I love this-beautifully said!
Patti->thanks very much! ๐