Remains to us elusive
Elusive is its true form
Form it takes we may not like
Like or not, it we endear
Endear that falsity, change
Change that perspective today
Today let us see an image
Image that remains true one
One in eyes, of one so near
Near in heart, so true and dear
For Acrostic Only
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
heyy leo..frst of all vry glad to c u here at a new space..:)nd ya, vry well written, nicely gripped words..capturing the whole essence..:)
Very cute.. esp. the way you've put the acrostic.. like the ending word of previous sentence being the beginning of the next…. truly amazing 🙂 Nice template.. Good comeback 🙂 Love it soooooo much 🙂
I like this style Leo, I am going to give it a try later this month.
—–Maddy—–its an old space actually! :)glad u liked my reflection!
—–Meow—–ur template inspired it! :Dthanks!
—–Amias—–looking to see ur try! 🙂
I am going to try Leo, this seem to be fun. Also you forgot to link Acrostic Only at the bottom of your poem.
—-Amias—-looking fwd to seeing ur try! 🙂
Leo,I'm a fan of leading lines. Really makes one work for the next. Truly a wonderful reflection, this acrostic is.
—–Melissa—–thanks! 🙂
Leo,I sure enjoyed the creative new way you wrote this acrostic.Well done.
—–Maggie—–glad you liked the creativity of this prompt! thanks! 🙂
Very good Leo! Thanks for your comments on my blog about my win on the acrostic poem FAITH. I meant to sigh up and follow you ages ago, so I am here to do just that! :)I look forward to reading more of your words 🙂
—–Tabitha—–thank you Tab! thanks for the follow. i am not that active here, as I mentioned in the comment at your blogspace. but yeah, you'll be seeing works here too! :)hope to see you on my FoI blog. :)thanks again!