Show of vanity
Leads to unwanted sorrow
Clouds the soul with doubt
Frustration takes over mind
Incubates nightmares
For 3WW(Vanity,Incubate, Nightmare)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
heyy..vry well take on the wrds..i can easily relate..nice wrk..:)
Good stuff, but I had a bit of a problem with both minds being so close. Maybe change the first to soul?Lurid
So much truth in this one. Nicely done.
ooh i am so tempted to do this one…may be later today..
@mads,u can? :)glad u liked it!
@thom,thank u for that! 🙂 considered & edited! 🙂
@anthony,thank u! 🙂
@shradds, cool. will come check out too! 🙂
very well written leo 🙂 🙂
i can somewat relate to those words.. …urs..
How true!!!!!!!
short and soul wrenching. good job
Nice piece! How true it is too.
so much said with so few words
Great. I love the emotion in this.
Wise words Leo.Yvonne,
very nice, i'm finding I really like the way people are using incubate!
@kristy,thank u very much! 🙂
@yvonne,thank you so very much! 🙂
@mardeen,glad u liked the emotion in it! 🙂
@daily panic,thanks very much! 🙂
@nicole,yes, very true for many i guess! 🙂
@ilyria,thank you 🙂
Cool – perfect use of the prompt.
@miya,yeah, isn't it? 🙂
@hemu,thank you dude! 🙂
@priya,thank u so much! 🙂
@tumblewords,thank u very much! 🙂
Wow!Patsy
vanity…vanity…all is vanity!
Nice one
Amazing work!!!
@patsy,thank u very much! 🙂
@amity,hmm… not sure of that! 🙂
@jeeves,thank u! 🙂
@nuchy,thanks very much! 🙂
Well said and truly deep words.
amazing daawell a poet like u shd be born..amazing innovative u r …suber
wow nice one.. and so true
well written…these words got me thinking
I don't think it's always true, sometimes we have to have some pride either in our looks or mentality, in order to be ourselves, but I get what you mean
@shwetha,thank u! 🙂
@stephen,whats innovative in this? :O :)glad u liked it bro!
@shriti,thank u dear! 🙂
@aps,thinking of what? 🙂
@lissa,yeah, not always true.. but sometimes, overdoing the pride can get u nightmares i think 🙂
Nice!the waiting
@gautami,thank u! 🙂
"unwanted sorrow" seems a bit redundant… but I do like this poem.
@pjd,perhaps it is :)but some times it is true!
true, very well writtten leo..like it..:)
@sona,thanks! 🙂