We find at the end
Slippery are the last steps
On path to success
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
its truly amazing, how much u manage to convey with few words :)wonderful leo ๐
nice write up..b'ful mssg conveyed..:)
deep….really the words have so much meaning when you weave them into your creation ๐
How sweet and true!
hey veryy true…once we cross those steps, the success is all ours..
Those 3 lines speak volumes, from a very wise person. Good write.The picture is too good too.
and i already slipped on to the step to my happiness…:(t'was a failure…:(
Just 15 words, 3 lines but equivalent to a motivational book ๐ Loved it meows ๐
am not after success…but slipped quite a number of times! haha :)if you can laugh at yourself on the path success is near, they say! :)good one, Vinay :)wishes, devika
fantabulous ๐
nice words.. and so true
A few words which convey such alot.Lovely picture.Yvonne.
how i wish i had climbed those last few steps carefully……
Vinay, Beautiful Fabulous Message ๐ ๐
@priya,thank u dear!! ๐
@mads,thank u ๐
@gullu,thank u! i had no idea they had so much meaning! ๐
@nuchy,thanks dear!
@prams,yes, exactly! ๐
@swapna,speak volumes from wise person.. me wise ๐ wow!! ๐
@amity,try again, giving up on slippery ground is never an option!! ๐
@meow,haha ๐ thank u!!
@devika,true thoughts those i feel ma'am!! :)thank u!
@desi,thank u ๐
@shriti,glad u liked it!
@yvonne,thank u! ๐
@anwe,sigh! me too.. but we always are in hurry for success, so we run up recklessly ๐
@sahana,thanks a lot! ๐
thanks Leo…:):)
@amity,welcome ๐ ๐
yesthere r barriers to success…nd to achieve something isnt that easy we have to struggle nd only later we realize that the path to success is slippery better wear ur shoes :p else u wud slip lolzzz nd may be u cud do skating ๐ yey
@stephen,yeah.. barriers are there.. the slippery path makes for a good skate eh? ๐
true that man…short n staunch message… nice…
@arun,thanks!
i like this very much..beautifully conveyed..
@sona,glad u like this very much!