“Don’t you have any pride?” his friend yelled at him. “She’s hurt you again, and yet you want to go back to her? She’s not even ashamed of herself, hurting you, and you still want her?”
“It’s not her fault completely. I’ve hurt her too, by not being the person she expected me to be”, he replied. “I want another chance to be that person; I’ll change myself if I have to.”
And he rushed to the door, flung it open and to his surprise saw her standing there.
“I am so sorry. I’ve treated you like you did not exist. I felt I needed someone else, but now I realize, you’re the best there is. I heard your friend’s words. I’ve hurt you a lot, and I am indeed ashamed about the way I’ve acted. Would you be willing to give me one more chance?” she asked, tears sliding down her cheeks.
He took her into his arms and held her close. They both knew at that moment that they were meant to be together.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
heyy..me the first one..:) nice read leo..thank god,at last she realised..:)
so shes been eavesdropping??..she wont even know shes mistreating him and he wont tell??what a chicken..coz of these guys only some girls are under the wrong assumptions..i dont blame the girls for this..free
too good to realize she's the best for him…:)it's not bad to give another chance…:)the message pricks my heart because of someone from afar off…:)
Yes, I can relate. I have felt this shame!
awww romantic 🙂
It does sometimes happen like that. Nice read.
Well that's OK for now but will it last? Now you set me thinking of all the scenarios. Thanks Leo.
@mads,yeah, she had realized and come to apologize to him 🙂
@soin,not eavesdropping completely. she had come to apologize on her free will, but heard his friend's yelling outside! 🙂 that was my point of view! urs is good too! :)thank u!
@amity,yeah, not too bad to give a second chance!:)
@heliotropism,hmm! 🙂 thank u!
@dee,thanks! 🙂
@tumblewords,yes, it does, doesn't it? :)thank you!
@oldegg,yeah.. lot of future scenarios! 🙂
Vinay, So Beautiful & Touching 🙂 🙂
Very sweet.. I've been there done that … I shout at ma friend like anything and cry for what I did. He will just keep quite till I realize my mistake on my own… He says "Sweets, you know everything. I need not tell you anything. But whats bothering you".. Its my insecure feeling that I'll lose him!!! I din tell him yet since he knows that veryyyyyyyyyy well 🙂 yet we smile through things and move on 🙂
Sooooooo sweeet!
sometimes we never realize that there is nothing better than finding the best person .. and nothing more hurtful than losing him !!
prats said it allsometimes we do it ….nice daa few words has lots to say …..loved it da
awwww.. how sweet!! loved it 🙂
nice one leo 🙂
hey vinay..loved the emotions..she was very very lucky to have got him..:)
🙂 romantic 🙂
awee…so sweet!!thank God realization occurred well in time…and it doesn't matter who initiates as far as the distance between hearts is abridged!wonderful Leo!really loved this one!keep writing!God bless you!
@sahana,thank u very much! 🙂
@miya,yeah, 🙂 smile thro things and move on!! so true!
@nuchy,thanks! 🙂
@pratsie,exactly!! 🙂
@steph,thanks!: )
@shriti,thank u very much! 🙂
@priya,thank u 🙂
@prams,he was lucky to have her too maybe!! 🙂
@shrav,thanks! 🙂
@parzi,well said! :)god bless u too re!
I think we're all guilty of saying something we later on regret.You put this over excellently.Yvonne.
@yvonne,exactly! 🙂
GUILTY GUILTY GUILTY!to be hanged 😛Shame on me p.s. love it
@Desi,will drop by soon! 🙂 glad u love my work!
he he… Fairy tale characters have no ego !!!
@arun,true.. not ever real life fairy tales! 😀
sweet emotional story..liked it loads..:)
@sona,glad u liked it! 🙂