Feel so very morose
Everything is wrong
The lips are moving
Can’t hear the song
Something so dear
Seems so misplaced
So lost without it
Feeling very dazed
No urge to take up
This ink and quill
No much meaning
Why do I write still?
An urge to give up
Throw all this away
Forget it happened
All these lovely days
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
well written.and a great joke about quitting. I dont think you can quit writing because you write even about quitting writing 🙂 🙂
dnt ever quit,,, fr nothing… fr no one 🙂 btw this touched my heart !!
This too shall pass.. its a part and parcel of the 'life of a blogger' .. 🙂 straight and well composed.
ha? what?well, you just took your quill to pen your another sad thoughts…:)"something so dear, seems so misplaced"…your pen?"the lips are moving, can't hear the song"…you're deaf?i love your poem…:)have a great week ahead, sans those morose feelings eh…:)
Very elegant.. but don't tell me that you are gonna quit writing, blogging!! please…
you cant forgetto write, my dearit is your breathyour heart's song you heartake up and write upis all you need to doas it confuses usto compliment youLeo is the pen you haveits the needle from heartto weave the little wordsto form a beautiful peaceNever think to leave..!!!
Leoooooooo……whats wrong….if i go by the expression…a very well written piece of poetry but if i go into interpretation and depth…very painful and lonely!whats wrong ya????all well???i know something is bothering u what is it…you can share….and dont even think about putting your pen to rest…you cannot quit writing…and you shouldn't even think about it..it is your relief area and a pleasure so many readers thn y so???i dont know what it is but just hope you make peace with yourself soon…you are not the kinds who would give up to a situation…so hold on to your strength and since writing is your soul there is no way you can move away from it..in fact use it more to emerge out of the turmoil..we are all here for you..remember that!plzzzzzzzzzzz cheerup……tke good care of your self!God bless you!
soo rue:)..i dont think u should quit r will ever quit either:)..but the feel of quitting tat u have rhymed is jus too good:)
Hi!I just came across your blog. I like the background. The colours go very well :)You write really well. Keep it up. Don't quit writing the way you mentioned in your poem 🙂
@priya,hmm.. was serious when i wrote it. now i find it a joke too 🙂
@pratsie,no, wont quit. dont think i'm done with my blogging days as yet! 🙂
@aria,yeah, i know.. part and parcel :)now its passed. will be back to writing sooner than i thought! 🙂
@amity,yeah, when mind is down, sad thoughts are easiest to conjure!nah, my pen is not misplaced… was my thoughts.. and lips moving without voice.. nah, not deaf.. just my mind is so occupied with some thoughts, that i can't hear anything else :)glad u loved it!
@meow,yep. was thinking. now not thinking of it anymore!
@yamini,:) that was so sweeet! 🙂 thank u! i'm not leaving, its just a once in a while phase 🙂
@parzi,thanks so much for that very caring comment 🙂 was a bit off color. now all fine! 🙂 wont quit, not yet 🙂 still got some more days left in this mind i guess 🙂
@nan,nope. not quitting! 🙂
@cursed,welcome to my blog 🙂 glad u liked it!m not quitting 🙂 hope u drop by again too! 🙂 thanks!
Hmmmmm… :(Don't you dare!!
hey leo what happened?? why so sad?be happy and smile :)byeeeeeeeeetake care
keep the urge away from you for a while. vinay, peep on to my blog if time may allow you. got some thing for you there. look for the note posted today [26th oct]. cant promise that i wud help u come over this urge, but i sure could contribute 🙂
liked this..bit sad.. hope all works out well for you.. like seeing u smiling..always..
Aww. Don't quit!
@nushy,I DARE 😛
@shriti,just a mood off phase! 🙂 m fine now! 😀
@anil,not having that urge anymore! :)thank u for that very nice token of honor bro! am honored indeed!
hmmmm…if i go as per lines,they are jus b'fuly drafted, but wish dese re nt ne true feelings..hehe..dnt ever think 2 quit..!!!
@mads,nope. not thinking anymore! 🙂
oye whts wrong with u man….dnt think anything else u wd be kicked by sme1…btw nice poem lovely lines
@steph,someone who?? 😀
hehe u knw it…m cumin to bangalore next jan nd m damn sure u will gt to knw that some1 lolzzzz
@stephen,welcome to bangalore anytime! 🙂