Walking In The Rain…

Walking in the rain

None sees my tears

None feels my pain
No hope I see near
Mind seems adrift
In the river of fear
This veil must lift
Afar must be sorrow
Fortunes shall shift
Yet where to go
For revival to begin
I still do not know
Chances seem thin
Yet battle on I shall
For it is must I win

Form: Terza Rima

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

34 thoughts on “Walking In The Rain…”

  1. very beautifully written, the form of poetry is Terza Rima?but the message is sad….walking in the rain? should be romantic, but that is your thought,went back to sad themes again?…:)

  2. Enjoyed the form and the write, though there's a sense of despair in the lines. Liked the spirit of the thought to battle on.Wonderfully written as always Kunju.

  3. @amity,msg is sad? no no, it starts sad and goes to positivity ma'am :)and walking as a couple in rain is romantic.. walking alone, who to romance ma'am? 😀 heheh…

  4. even though this had something positive in the end still it is very painful and sad….a hatrick of lonely poems…cant accept them as fiction…Leo…now I am worried…what happened…dont be upset plzzzzzzzzzzz…everything will go fine…how can you feel so lonely when we are all here for you…you deserve to be happy for spreading so much of happiness and warmth around than why are you so low..its not nice to c u like that…please cheer up …u look better smiling….so common now…

  5. @parzi,the first one, not fiction i agree. did feel like quitting yesterday! a small disagreement with a friend made me off color! but this is fiction! :)thank u so much for that encouraging words! 🙂 god bless u too 🙂

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