Jangle with a friend
Words reckless uttered with rage
Now only heartache
For 3WW:Jangle,Recless,Heartache
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
heyy..nice usage of wrds..b'fuly framed..gud going..!!!
nice 🙂 🙂
Very true, very sad, and well done to boot.http://radio-nowhere.org/nb/?p=271
much truth in these words, I'm afraid.
It so often happens – unfortunately.Great words.
Sadly true – nice work!
…true!!!…we dunno that what we're uttering is already hurting friends!…need to choose our words the same care we choose our food..:)good morning…:)
So true… Nice haiku!
Meaningful haiku !
once u make a frnd, never fight with him..looks very ideal..but it has got its advantages..:) Godo post.. yeah, at the end, it is only heartache..and no use..
Awwwww 🙁 Heart ache really …. such are the effects of YOUR words
Good advice,Yvonne,
hmm.. its true..beautifully presented 🙂
nice haiku bro..:)..urs..hemu..
Reminds me of thirukural….Yaagavaraayinum naa kaakka..
really true..but u can never hurt anyone leo 🙂
nicely written.. 🙂
3 words. 3 lines. and so much said! impressive.
you're quite right, words can hurt a lot more than physical pain
so true Leo….this happens quite often…we should watch r words..and never take r friends for granted..because the pain give by r near n dear ones doesn't go away easily!well written!keep writing!God bless!
@parzi,yes.. taking friends for granted is not good idea.. watching what we say does help 🙂
@lissa,yes.. words can hurt a lot!
@anil,thanks bro! 🙂
@shriti,thanks very much 🙂
@suma,i can't? haven't tried yaar!
@maddy,really? haven't heard it…so not right for me to comment! :)thank u!
@hemu,thanks bro!
@amal,thanks very much!! 🙂
@yvonne,thank u 🙂
@miya,really? oh dear.. i shd reduce my words effectiveness then.. sigh!
@prams,good advice.. sometimes difficult to follow though! 🙂
@pratsie,thanks u very much!:)
@JS,thanks a lot! 🙂
@amity,yes.. its inadvertent.. but hurtful a lot!!
@tumblewords,thank u
@anthony,yes.. happens indeed!!
@thom,yes.. a lot of truth sadly! 🙁
@mark,thank u very much!
@priya,thank u! 😀
@maddy,thank u very much 🙂 🙂
lovely vinay.. your poem explained one thing to me very clearily.. why you are known as prince of poetry 😉
lovely vinay.. your poem explained one thing to me very clearily.. why you are known as prince of poetry 😉
🙂 lovely
🙂 lovely
🙂 lovely
🙂 lovely
🙂 lovely
@insi,prince? 😮 who me? :Dr u sure u haven't got me confused with another Leo? 😉
sometimes when resolved heart will be blessed with no pain..:)…loved the usage of words dear:)..
Short, yet a meaningful take on the prompt Vi.
Well said in so few words 🙂
WOW.WOW.WOW.
@ilyria,thank u 🙂
@willow,thanks very much! 🙂
@swapna,thanks chechy! 🙂
@nan,yeah.. true what u say! :)thanks a lot!