Isn’t this very moment
The most important thing
Life changes so quickly
Be it sweet or with sting
A new life will be born
Beauty from a cocoon
Taking to the blue sky
A winged beauty soon
Graceful in its slow flight
A sight for all to admire
Those colorful little wings
I sometimes do desire
Such moments I do feel
Beauty to life they bring
This very moment indeed
The most important thing
PS: This is my first ever poem. The one which I had found few days back. It was written by me when I was in 5th grade…
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Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
hey leo its so sweeeet.. the first and the best..loved it soo much
WOAH !!!…wat a poem leo !!! simply mind blowing…!!! loved it very much…..jue keep penning such beautiful poems… 😀 …. and this is the 1st poem u wrote wen u wer in 5th grade !!!! its simply outstanding man !!! fantabulous and stupendous !!! i must say ur a brilliant poet !!!
This is awesome….I can't even think of writing anything that could be even close to waht you wrote in 5th grade! Totally awesome! 🙂
orn genius !!!
loved it leo :)its really beautiful 🙂
Yes,this is the moment…Quite a creative fifth grader you were…And believe it or not, you lifted my spirit.
@choclover,thank u so much! 🙂 whats ur name btw? 🙂
@kitten,thanks a lot for that lovely comment! :)whats ur name btw? 🙂
@gagan,long time no see bro.. h r u?thanks for liking it! 🙂
@pratsie,orn genius? :-ome? 😀 really? hehe.. thank u so much!
@suma,thanks a lot!! 🙂
@anwe,glad to cheer u up! :)feeling better then? good!
beautiful nice idhelam usual comments la?? i wanna comment something different and it should make u feel my genuinity towards the liking of your poem! So watta comment???
5th lah u cud put so many alphabets together?? adutha literature nobel ungaluke. hopefully u know how to smile widely..free
you are so creative. i am jealous! 🙂 good one bro.
Beauty of this moment is truly an important thing. Liked the fact echoing so nicely in "Life changes so quicklyBe it sweet or with sting"
@miya,ur comment spoke volumes in itself re :)thanks very much!! 🙂
@soin,enakka? literature nobel? 😀 thanks dude!! yeah, know to smile widely 😀
@anil,thanks a lot! 🙂
@swapna,thanks chechy :)glad u liked it a lot!
woww..excellent..hmm..are u sure u were in 5th grade..hehe..joking..:)rlly nice yr..so much creativ u were..gr8..keep penning..!!!
@maddy,sure i 'm sure i was in 5th grade re… i was sleeping last bench in free hour.. 😀 wrote this, ma'am saw me scribblin, saw the poem and shot me off to the next interschool contest 😀
hey vinay..that was an awesome one frm a 5th standard kid..very veryyy nice..its even nice to see u posting this.Thanks
@prams,is it? thanks a lot! :)it was demanded after the prev post by readers :Dhehe 🙂
Wow Leo,I so wish for the wings I lived this moment 🙂
what an intellectual piece of a 5th grader Leo…you're really born with the gift son…!:)
Considering the time you wrote it in, it is quite commendable! Keep such poems coming!
Most true words Leo, the present moment is precious be it happy or not, made most enjoyable reading.Yvonne
wow.. that deep thought for a 5th grader 🙂 🙂
beautiful,unbelievable, u wrote this when you were in 5th grade, genius.. thanks for sharing..
@L,thanks a lot! :)u lived it? wow…
@amity,no.. i am in midst of perfecting that skill i blv 🙂
@ajey,i wrote it in less time bro, but i wrote it when i was quite young 🙂
@yvonne,thank u so much 🙂
@priya,it is? 😮 dint realize 😀
@sona,no no.. no genius n all 🙂 just simple leo here 🙂
i cant believe my eyes….did i read fifth grade there……?GOD….see i m right na when i say u r gifted ..wowww….superlative!!!!!such clarity of thoughts,such beautiful expression and tremendous flow..i dont think i could even frame proper sentences in class five[ahmm…okie fine i still can't]this one is beautiful Leo…thank u sooooo much for sharing it with us…i loved it!take care1god bless!
oh my gosh!! you were in fifth grade and you wrote this!?!??!YOU are simply amazing and so as your first poem! loved it 🙂
hieee Leo sorryyyyyyyyy dint read the ps earlier…this was ur first poem…?????????guess u r a winner at the starting point!fabulous!!!thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for putting it up….its adorable….and precious!hats off to you !great going!
@parzi,sure u could frame them re! 😀 thanks for liking it so much 🙂
@parzi,yes. was first poem 🙂 thank u 🙂
@nushy,is it? thanks for tha amazing comment nush 🙂
truly beautiful; inspiring words…
well done Leo 🙂
thank u, Sina 🙂
Hi Vinay, so this was your first poem ever, it was very good start!
yeah it was, Ina 🙂 glad u liked it..
Wow!
Even at a young age you exhibited a great talent…
I’m so glad you kept writing!
So am I, Aynsley! 🙂