True mind
Can win it all
It is not bravery
To attack from behind a mask
Conquer
Each obstacle by fighting hard
Look rivals in the eye
Then sweet shall be
Success
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Well said Leo :)Still waiting for your first ever poem!!! 🙂 🙂
chose apt words and put in a very simple manner leo :)Love,Sowmi
otooooooooooooooooooooooo gooood!
loved the opening thought ! 🙂
good morning Leo……nice rendition for OSI…i made one, how will i post it for OSI?how about your first-ever poem? you kept us hanging, he he he…:)
I like this one Leo, you did well.
WOW!!! You conquered our mind!! 😛
Vinay, Very Beautiful Poem 🙂 🙂 Vinay, Curiously Waiting For Your First Ever Poem 🙂 🙂 Come Up With That Poem As Earliest As Possible 🙂 🙂
@priya,thanks a lot! my first poem? 😮 ok. will put up soon! 😀
Now, if I could only follow this advice! Well done.
@meow,tthanks sowmi.. 🙂 glad u liked it!
@desi,thanks a lot! 🙂 🙂
@pratsie,thanks dear!
@amity,thanks! ur poem has been linked too! :)i'll put it up later! 🙂
@amias,thanks 🙂 glad u liked it!!
@nuchu,i did? 😀 okiedokey!
@sahana,thanks a lot! 🙂
@kathiesbirds,thank u 🙂
heyyy Leothis one is so well written and absolutely true and precise…apt words for a great thought!wonderful!!!keep writing~!god bless u!
Very true words.
wow!!! its lovely leo !!!….
Dropping the mask is a kind of conquest.
loved it dear:)…nice one:)
hey leo !! so rightly said..great job
Thanks for those words……just the answer I needed for a problem.now I know what direction to go.Yvonne.
You give wonderful advice…very well put!
@parzi,thanks a lot! 🙂
@anthony,thanks! 🙂
@kitten,thank u 🙂
@sandy,yes indeed it is! 🙂
@tulip,thanks a lot! 🙂
@choclover,thank u! 🙂
@yvonne,problem? hmm..glad to help! 🙂
@sweetest,thank u very much 🙂
Well put, Leo!what has time got to do with blood?
@gautami,thanks very mmuch 🙂
heyy nice wrds..hmm..luvlyy poem..:)
hey.. a good 1.. is this a cinquain??
@mads,thanks a lot!! 🙂
@vishnu,yeah bro.. it is :)butterfly cinquain 🙂
leo that is very motivating!!!loved it..
We both seem to have taken this prompt in a similar direction. Nice work!
Leo,You said it well…it is best to look eye to eye.Good read.
there is a gift to looking things strait in the eye. Thank you. Spirithelpers
Cowards though they maydastardly be, tis said live longer than the brave. Nice form here Leo touting a moral lesson to be learned…
heyy..tag it under cinquain na..just to tell u..:)
@shradds,thanks a lot 🙂 🙂
@geraldine,is it? 🙂 will drop by soon Geraldine 🙂
@maggie,yeah indeed it is best!! 🙂
@tammie,thank u 🙂
@jim,perhaps :)but it is better a short lived brave one, than a long living coward i guess! 🙂
@maddy,ok 😀 will see 🙂
loved it vinu :)inspiring poem 🙂
@suma,thanks u very much!! 🙂
Liked this very much, sure way to conquer.
@swapna,thanks a lot!! 🙂
hey vinay..u r back with this kind of poetry..good.. am eager to kearn more forms frm u ..:) plz keep postg..and this is a real cutie..
@prams,thanks a lot re!! will keep writing, and yeah.. will share more forms of poetry too 🙂
Eloquent and lovely!
@tumblewords,thanks very much!! 🙂
A coward, basically, is what I am. Yet I realize that sometimes confrontation is necessary. And I can guarantee you that I will remember your words when I do. Look them in the eye! So thank you!
Hmmm…Ekdum sahi baat hai …but requires ample bravery !!
@komal,yep. requires ample bravery indeed! 🙂
@andree,confronting is not the issue ma'am :)when u do, hitting when ur opponents back is turned is cowardly 🙂
Going unmasked surely must be the most difficult thing to do.I enjoyed this take on the prompt. Thank you.
wonderful thought, and poem. i definitely agree its not bravery to attack from behind a mask..
@patois,its a difficult thing indeed 🙂
@sona,thank u very much 🙂
Very true indeed- nicely written~
@patti,thanks very much! 🙂