More than one way
There to do a task
Yet which to take
To you I did ask
The path you said
I did take to do
When I got lost
I did come to you
Yet you tell me
All faults is mine
You never helped
Just did not shine
I want to walk away
All because of you
Don’t help anyone
To a better life too
More than one way
To lead this life
You made me stuck
Midway with strife
Now I’ll go one way
Away from you all
I know to get up
Even if I do fall
P.S : Thanks Meow for the idea. Some people in the world are like that. Pull us a wrong way, and then deny it, leaving us in the middle, unhappy.
P.P.S : I couldn’t think of a better title. Suggestions are welcome.!!
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
the title is fine…Stuck, but it can be more intriguing of you if you wrote "Stuck On you", he he he…but no, seriously now, you did it well, but the message is clear that everytime we fall, we should know how to get up…cheers Leo, and am proud i must be the first to be here this time…:) 🙂
Nicely written and it was a good read 🙂
I hadn't noticed the title first but after reading the post-script I scrolled up. The poem is nice – "I know to get up Even if I do fall" so the idea is 'keep moving' which is great .. however the title says 'stuck' but then ..I can't think of a better one either… 😀 keep writing,
Taking a decision to move on, still lies with us :)Well written Leo 🙂
I think such people actually teach yout o chose and walk on your own paths .. atleast you are answerable just to yourself then.. nice lines 🙂
choosing a path nicely written bro :)..urs..hemu..
🙂 what more I've to tell?
Beautiful Lines 🙂 🙂 Very Rightly Said 🙂 🙂
beautifully written.. loved it :)but luckily none i know are like that.. almost all have been with me at times of trouble.lucky me 🙂
@amity,yes.. 🙂 thank u 🙂 glad u liked it!!and proud to have u first too!
@kasabiangirl,thank u very much!!:)
@aria,yeah.. poem comes to mind soon, but titling it later is a headache 🙂
@priya,thank u! 🙂
@PS:yes.. they do that too! 🙂
@hemz,:)
@meow,oye miya, tell more na 😀
@creativity,thank u 🙂
@amal,yeah, almost all have been with me too! :)thanks for the follow!
what doesnt kill us only makes us stronger!!
hey vinay, nice one..umm title, i too feel its ok..:)
nice one leo :)last 4 lines are very nice..i liked it a lot 🙂
@pri,very true 🙂
@prams,is it? cool 🙂
@suma,thanks very much 🙂
Leo…this one was very nice…with a weak helpless state in the beginning…to the emergence of a strong self in the end!wonderful!!!hats off to you…n yes the title is very apt!keep writing!take care!
hey leo! its too good 🙂
@parzi,thanks re! 🙂
@choclover,thank u very much :):)
Liked the whole idea n the flow of words.Last two lines are the ones i would like to shout out loud.
@swapna,why don't u? 🙂