More than one way

There to do a task
Yet which to take
To you I did ask

The path you said
I did take to do
When I got lost
I did come to you

Yet you tell me
All faults is mine
You never helped
Just did not shine

I want to walk away
All because of you
Don’t help anyone
To a better life too

More than one way
To lead this life
You made me stuck
Midway with strife

Now I’ll go one way
Away from you all
I know to get up
Even if I do fall

P.S : Thanks Meow for the idea. Some people in the world are like that. Pull us a wrong way, and then deny it, leaving us in the middle, unhappy.
P.P.S : I couldn’t think of a better title. Suggestions are welcome.!!

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

30 thoughts on “Stuck!!”

  1. the title is fine…Stuck, but it can be more intriguing of you if you wrote "Stuck On you", he he he…but no, seriously now, you did it well, but the message is clear that everytime we fall, we should know how to get up…cheers Leo, and am proud i must be the first to be here this time…:) πŸ™‚

  2. I hadn't noticed the title first but after reading the post-script I scrolled up. The poem is nice – "I know to get up Even if I do fall" so the idea is 'keep moving' which is great .. however the title says 'stuck' but then ..I can't think of a better one either… πŸ˜€ keep writing,

  3. Leo…this one was very nice…with a weak helpless state in the beginning…to the emergence of a strong self in the end!wonderful!!!hats off to you…n yes the title is very apt!keep writing!take care!

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