Trod paths without luck
And met failures on the way
Lost hope in this life itself
I felt sad each passing day
Still you stayed by my side
Made me fight for the victory
A friend like you is a real gem
Now talisman you are to me
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
A very nice acrostic, Leo. I like it a lot. It was nice that you had this mysterious being helping you and staying there with you.To me it fits the dictionary definition about the best I have seen so far. ..
A standing ovation!!!I've lost words now…
beautiful acro leo…ode to priceless friends…
its so nice bro :)..urs..hemu..
ermm.. commenting after a break.. 😀 was around this place though.. well of what use, everytime i got just this to day, awesome.. well done.. everytime i come here, read and then hit the comment button, i get lost with my way with words :)off : non black template : am searching for a perfect black one again !
Wowwwwww 🙂 So Beautiful Touching Lines 🙂 🙂
woww leo…!!…its beautiful….i really love ur poems…u express everything in one single word…!!!…:)…
a really very heart-touching acro..!!!
that's a nice ode to friendship 🙂
Good one vinay…and sounded sincere too..good going ..
@Jim,best so far? 🙂 thank u very much!!
@Anwe,thank u very much dear!
@Arun Kumar,thank you re!!
@Hemu,glad u liked it! 🙂
@Shrav,overcomment!! 😛 my words are not so awesome that u lose words while commenting dude!!thanks a lot 🙂
@Sahana,thank you very much!! 🙂
@Krazy,thank you. i love urs too, just don't find time to drop by all blogs.. 🙁 will make some time soon!glad u liked it!
@Krazy,thanks very much!
@Kasabian,thanks! welcome back to my blog after a long time 😀
@Prams,sounded sincere? 🙂 it is dear!glad u liked it!!
A life enhancing acrostic there.
beautiful leo:)
absolutely perfect leo…oh hw i wish i cld have something like a talisman…
gud one:) and cool signature 🙂
What a fabulous, delightful acrostic! The lines are just divine, and thats a perfect photo, I'd say, to reflect the Muse here..
Never read an acrostic so meaniningful and good. Three Cheers on this one.
beautiful vinay 🙂
Anthony:thanks very much! 🙂
Nan:thanks very much! 🙂
Twee:thanks dear! i wish ur wish comes true! 😀
Shriya:thanks dear!! 🙂
Dark Lord:thanks very much! 🙂
Swapna:Hip Hip Hurray!! 🙂
Suma:thanks a lot!! 🙂
A lovely feeling!
Nathalie:thank u very much!! 🙂
wow!!! i got no words leo. its awesome! see this is why i'm always silent!
You make such a lovely point…friends truly are our talismans. Beautiful!
REALLY beautiful, Leo! Loved it!! 🙂 🙂
Ah, this is well done mate! Keep at it!
It's beautiful to think of a friend as a talisman.
Stunning poem and photo!
I think you captured that word well with this acrostic. Funny how to each individual it could be something so different. Nicely done.
Very good Leo.
how wonderful to have a friend like that!
Pri:thanks very much! but dont be silent with me!! 😛
SITG:indeed yes..! they are talismans!!
Dhanya:thank you very much!! welcome to my blog!
Ajey:thanks bro!!
Sandy:thanks a lot! 🙂
Vita:thank you very much!!
Missy:Yes. To each person, a talisman can be different! 🙂
Amias:thanks a lot!!
Tammie:yes indeed! it is delightful!!
You couldn't ask for a better tailisman!
Kathie:thank you very much!! 🙂
A good description of a true friend 🙂
perfect acrostic leo!great use of words..
I feel so abt you at times ! perfecto !!
that was such a well written acrostic Leo…perfect choice of words..very well blended and brought out beautifully!superb!keep it up!take care!god bless!
This is one Acro where i see many syllables….but then, nice and sweet..!!!
Nushy:thank you!! 🙂
Shraddhs:thanks a lot! glad that u liked it!
PS:ditto dear! 🙂 thanks very much!
Parzi:thanks a lot 🙂 glad u liked it!god bless you too! 🙂
Yami:all acrostics needn't be short and sweet! :Dglad i got one out of two atleast!! 🙂
Leo, I imagine that the one sitting and looking down at his friend is thnk these lovely words. Thanks for visiting my place
Moe:yes indeed 🙂 thank u for stopping by too!
Beautiful acrostic leo. Talisman, i have found mine.. and you know it.. thank you ever so much for being my talisman..:)
Sona:i'm a talisman? :O wow! 😀
What a lovely tribute to a wonderful friend. I enjoyed reading this Leo, thank you!
yes Leo, good friends are like talisman to us…
Geraldine:thank u m'am :)gld u liked the read!
Amity:thank you!
I love the acrostic- great interpretation~ Ah… friends…such a vital part of life- true talismans
Patti:yes indeed! :)true talismans!! 🙂
Leo, "Trod" is the past tense of "Tread", you can use one or the other, but "Treaded" is incorrect.
@amias,oh.. ok Amias, will correct it now! thank u!
Congratulations! You have won a BAP Awards, for for this poem. Click HERE and scan down!This my young friend is an amazing acrostic, you blew me away with it.
—–Amias—–thanks very much! 🙂 glad to get an BAP for it! 🙂