Presumption of
Repeating past
Ends many
Dreams unfulfilled
If every moment
Can repeat again
Then life is just lies
Any dreams die
Because they do
Languish in past
Ending the future
For AO:Predictable
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
nicely said dear:)..beautifully kissed:)…interesting perception:)
is each line stands on its own ? liked the poem but not as an acrostic .. maybe i m missing something here 🙁
How sweett..:)..Good one vinay..
Soo sweet & Beautiful Vinay 🙂 🙂
the importance of if…….:)
Nan:thank u very much! 🙂
Pratsie:yaar, thanks very much! i will get better acrostic later! 🙂
Prams:thanks! 🙂
Sahana:thank u very much! 🙂
Sandra:is it? 🙂
Again good words , loved the read.Yvonne.
What action in the past that is being repeated, and why is it predictable? If something is predictable, can it be a lie?Just a few questions Leo, because I know you take your writing very seriously. As an acrostic this one didn't hit the mark, but it a nice poem.On has to be careful of bumpy roads when it comes to poetry, period. Especially acrostic, it must flow.I work hard at mines and I don't always hit the mark — but I never give up trying.
You are on a roll! Keep at it!
what can I say Leo, but you really are a gifted one!thank God with it!but having dreams unfulfilled remain predictable…wish i could predict that my dream of being a good writer someday will materialize…:)
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nice post vinay :)liked it friend :)keep going:)
another good one!dreams remaining unfulfilled is predictable…. but it's the challenge of fulfilling them is what's fun 🙂
🙂 nice!
Yvonne:thank you!
Amias:I realized. I will do a better one soon.I never give up trying either!
Ajey:thank you very much!
Amity:thank you…yeah.. keep at it ma'am! ur dream of being good writer is already materialized, dreaming of beeing even better will materialize too 🙂
Pankhuri:thank u! i will check and take it! thanks for awarding! 🙂
Suma:thank u very much dear!
Mehreen:thank u very much! :)indeed it is a challenge!
Sawan:thanks! 🙂
wasn't able to concentrate 😀 almost felt like it was the reading comprehension section of cat (just the questions were missing and thank god for it 😀 )Commenting just so it would make u smile 🙂
Chechu!!!am delighted to see it and yah, am smiling a lot too! 🙂 thanks a lot!
ohoooo…late again…soorrrrryyyyy….but a lovely acrostic yet again…its difficult to decide whether u think better or write better…i guess both..:)keep it up Leotake care!god bless!
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Parzi: i read better yaar! :Dthank u very much! 🙂
Riya:yep.. on my way! 🙂
m really Thankful to you for dropping by my side n for ur valuable comments…i will try my best to improve…Thanks once again 🙂
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🙂 nice..!!!
Yami:thank u!
watever form it is, acro, poem, i really liked it. actually love the meaning.. 🙂
Sona:thanks a lot!! 🙂
Awesome thinking!!!!!!
Nuchu::)
Leo,I agree with Amias comments.
@maggie,thank u :)i've already done a second take on this!!