Yearning for peace
We left the city limits
Pursuing the sweet music
Of the silent valleys far
Calmness welcomed us
As to the top we climbed
At the top we stood soon
Saw a breathtaking view
The breeze enchanting
Music of beautiful nature
Filled this lovely world anew
A silent symphony began
As relieved from the stress
We collapsed on the grass
And drifted into a reverie
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Very well-written! Keep it up!
Picturesque indeed!!The images flashing across my eyes as i imagine myself in those serene settings..Beautiful lines filled with imagery..Cheers!
How do you manage to come up with lovely poems after poems? Sigh… ever thought of publishing?
An awesome view to slip into a reverie..no doubt. Nice pic and words to match it too.
WOW..lovely pic and even more lovely imagination in the form of those little lines..:)..U know, i wanna experience it once..:)
so cool Leo, even the feelings that you want to impart is so refreshing…you would feel on top of the world if you try to be on a summit!nice, really nice!:)
Hey, Awesome Template 😀 All Your Poems Are Fabulous 😀 I Read All Poems On This Page :DVery Beautifully Expressed 😀 🙂
Sahana:thanks very much! 🙂 glad that u liked it! 🙂
Amity:yeah guess so 🙂
Prams:yeah, i'd love it too.. for now my imagination rules! 🙂
Swapna:thank you very much! 🙂
Nikki:yes, i've thought of it.. but i want to improve more befor i do 🙂
Shruti:welcome to my blog! thank u for dropping in and appreciating my words! 🙂
Ajey:thank you very much!
beaautiful imagination.. i actually felt i was there.. feeling all of it.. so well written leo.
Trekking mountains is one of my fav. hobbies. There's just nothing like it to find inner peace.You described it beautifully here and made me yearn to make another trip real soon!
Sona:thank u very much! 🙂
Margaret:thanks very much! 🙂
nice poem vinu..good imagination and very beautiful pic..keep going friend 🙂
Snow White:thanks very much! 🙂
I am tired. Suffering from insomnia. In search of peace. I have found it. Bring on the reverie. Thank you.
Sandy:most welcome! :)thank u for dropping by!
in search of adjectives…will come back soon..!!!
Yami:okay! see u soon 🙂