Two minutes a day
If I just hear your voice,
Iโd empty my sorrow,
Have hope in tomorrow,
Just to hear you say,
I love you more everyday.
Two minutes a day
If I could be in your arms,
Iโd feel the world there,
Feel just love everywhere,
Just a hug from you says,
I love you more everyday.
Two minutes a day
If I could see you smile,
Iโd smile with you too,
Forgetting all my blues,
Just that loving smile says,
I love you more everyday.
Two minutes a day
If I could just be with you,
I know that day is so great,
For the future I can now wait,
Love, Iโd give my life for you,
Everyday I love you more too.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
yayyyyyyyy…me first!this one is amazing Leo…very warm,sweet,romantic and beautiful..a very wonderful feeling has been amazingly transformed into words by you!as i say always…your words create magic…n the magic wand has done it yet again!keep writing!take care!god bless!
A lovely poem Leo, words I could easily write to my dear departed.Enjoyed reading it.Yvonne.
HI vinay, lovelyyy poem .. ๐ stanza by stanza it was an improved exploration of love..
Leo no words.. just brilliant.. ud make anyone fall in love with this poem.. just too good.. love it..simple yet stunning.. wow..
Sona:thank u so very much! glad u liked it!
Pramoda:glad u felt that way! ๐ thank u for the praise! ๐
Yvonne:thank you. departed.. m so sorry.. but he is proud of u as a writer i am sure! ur brilliant urself! :)glad u liked my work!
Parzi:gld yu think i'm a magician! ๐ but m not that at all. certain times, the words just come in a flow. glad that u liked it so much! thanks Parzi ๐
just got so better and better that i felt myself float into his dreams of love and magic everyday :Dthanks. this is incredible!
at first I wud like to compliment u on ur template … one of the bests I have seen … nw abt the poem … as I always say … u have a certain kinda depth in ur write ups … n the best thng is not everyone has the ability to convey so many feelings in such few words ๐ u rock !!!
wowie…its tooo beautiful yaar…!!! loved it..!!!romatic….whom is it for???
that was wonderfully penned and am not saying more, but just clapping to whysoserioustodays comment ๐
Wonderful vinu..Loved it to the core.!
@ Shravan : second tym huh … nice nice … u jus love poking onto my comment … dunt u ??? ๐
wish i could write like this…great lines..!!:)
Lovely :)Can I dedicate this for someone?
Awe…some!!M even scared to comment you.Even my comments would sound inferior to your writtings.I love your style.
Eyeshadow:thank you so much. but please do comment. to me a readers comment is much superior than my work! for they show that they loved my work! ๐
Meera:sure. who to? please tell him to come here and see, don't copy it! ๐ glad u liked it so much!
Vinz:thanks a lot dude!
Suga:yeah.. shravan is the mischievous one ๐
Vysh:thanks so much! ๐
Shrav:hehe.. clap away dude! but it seems to be bugging her! ๐
Yami:no one in particular! :)glad u liked it ๐
Suga:glad u liked it! the template i loved too.. its quite beautiful ain't it? perhaps it'll stay for a while, but i'm a template addict, so can't guarantee it :)glad u liked my words.. the depth in simplicity is what i like to do. ๐ thank you.
Desi:floating into his arms? ๐ so nice dear!
Leo, to Anil,of course! Thanks so much! I would give him the link!Thanks again! Tc.
Leo, this is so very beautiful!!M, i love you swtu ๐
Meera:welcome! ๐
Anil:glad u liked it!:)