Time it passes me by so fast
One wasted moment, makes me last
One wrong choice, no mourning the past
How to manage, I know not now
Open the doors, heavens above
Take me to her, whom I did love
This world so small, it feels today
Only tears, not a joyous place
Hardship is fine, I do not mind
Amidst pain, my way I did find
No tears stood in the way of hope
Dreaded nothing, all I did cope
Love itself now shows no desire
Even hope to live, seems now dire
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
hey first one to comment.. sad but beautiful words..love the poem.
Inspiring …and Lovelyy 🙂
nice sad poem…loved it
Good one Vi. Enjoyed the verses very much.
Beautiful lines.I really liked your new template. It goes well with the theme of your blog. =)
Loved the poem Leo, how true the words, another wonderful post.Yvonne.
wow…soo touching dear:)…felt like have written emotionally…loved it very much dear…
Yellow Tulip,thanks very much. sometimes, i feel life is too hot to handle indeed!
Yvonne,glad u feel so! thanks a lot! 🙂
Shas,glad u liked it! 🙂
Swapna,glad u liked it!
Riya,thanks! 🙂
Pramoda,inspiring? :oglad u found it lovely!thank u very much!:)
Sona,thank u! glad to see u first! 🙂
ouch is all i can say! and somehow i can get the feeling which made u write it! i once had it too!Beautiful poem even if painfulKeep writing!
Nabi,thanks! glad u found it beautiful! 🙂
Gr8 work!!Loved it; the meaning, the emotion, the flow, the rhyme, the theme…all:))Keep going…keep writing!!
Fiducia,thanks very much! glad u liked it all! 🙂
Nice work!
Hi Leo,…you're really one talented creature! I like the message….keep up!
Well Written!
Sadly beautiful! 🙂
Aarthi,yeah, i know! 🙂 🙁
Standbymind,thanks! 🙂
Amity,glad u liked it! :)thanks for the appreciation! 🙂
Brosreview,thanks very much! 🙂
The journeys through love often take our breath away. Love the progression of this piece.
Missy,yes indeed. they do take our breath away. glad u loved it.will come by urs very soon. just stuck a bit right now!
creativity at its best! 🙂
Mehreen,thanks a lot! 🙂
How sad .. life can indeed be too hot to handle — very creative.
Indeed it can be Amias!