Few drops of water
Touch my dry lips, bless my soul
Quench my thirst for now
I SEEK ONLY SURVIVAL
Quench my thirst for now
Let few drops of water touch
Dry lips of my soul
PS: My poetic muse is very active these days. Another poem is there previous to this. The time I’ve given it doesn’t do its cause justice. If possible please do read that also and share your thoughts on it with me. Thank you!
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Beautiful hands .. and I so understand the survival instinct of quenching ones thirst.
nice pic and nice lines leo.. and i seek only survival:) 🙂 🙂
Vinu,nee supersatarada mone..And U are BACK to where you rightfully belong.. cool pic man.. :)Love,Nikhil
Yes, it is the soul that thirsts…. wonderful Spirithelpers
very good.! i liked this one 🙂
Wonderful job. ;o)
Beautiful…Fabulous Poem 😀
i liked these lines .:)
beautiful leo..:)..nicely done..thirst of soul :)..brilliant
Soulful!!
You put my thoughts into words..thanks for that.
its wonderful vinu 🙂
Beautiful lines, as always :-)Have a great weekend!
The plea of so many in this world. Excellently done.
Manivannan,thank u so much! 🙂
Anthony,yes. plea of so many! :)glad u liked it!
Thirst of soul?? Nice concept to pen upon…:)Liked the flow, as always!!! And the pic is amazing..!You know, its right there, the feel!!! You are quite poetically active these days and its nice..:) All your works are one better than the other..I kinda've sobered down…trying to ponder on my introspective to write what I feel, see, or think about..You keep going dude….Keep writing:)
Fiducia,yeah.. it is a good concept! :)the pic is by that artist, and it caught my eye immediately! its brilliant! :)being poetically active feels nice! and u r an inspiration always! u may be slow in writing, but u r right up there in brilliance! :)thanks Fiddy!
Snow White,thanks very much!
Anwesathese are your thoughts? what happened dear?
Swati,many thanks! 🙂
Yellow Tulip,thanks a lot! 🙂 glad u liked it!
Pramoda,thanks very much!
Sahana,thanks a lot! 🙂
Bethany,thanks very much! 🙂
Shriya,glad u liked it kiddo!
Tammie,indeed it is! 🙂 glad u like it! 🙂
Nikhil,superstar? nah, u must be mistaken dude! :)glad u liked it! 🙂
Shravan,i too seek only survival bro! 🙂
Amias,thanks! 🙂 the pic caught my attention asa i saw it! so used it! glad i could make the words count too! quenching one's thirst is indeed important!
wonderful to write on! :)liked the style… going reverse in the second half 🙂
This is outstanding. Just wonderful. Your soul speaks beautifully here.
So few words but so much feeling!
This speaks out. Love the repetion.inside, outside, which sidePlease don't forget to post your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited too each Monday morning!
hey Leoyet again…fabulous…the thirst for survival..the urge to live..u have expressed everything beautifully as always!really liked it!
Mehreen,hey! thanks a lot WS! glad u liked the words & the style! 🙂
Sandy,thanks very much! 🙂
Linda,thanks very much! 🙂
Gautami,glad u liked it! :)thank u for stopping by!will definitely post @ MNPT! 🙂
Parzi,thanks very much! 🙂 glad u liked my attempt!
nice one leo..very well written
Thank you, Leo..
Sona,thanks a lot! 🙂
Angel,thank u so much! 🙂
This is a wonderful interpretation of this prompt. Photo was perfect too. Nice one.
We want way more than survival… thus we keep drinking. Great piece.
i very much like the clarity & simplicity of what you say
Wonderful – the form works perfectly with this thirst!
Tumblewords,thank you. glad u liked it! 🙂
Q.di Bello,glad u like the simplicity! :)thank you very much!
Quiet Paths,yes indeed. we want more than survival!thanks a lot! 🙂
My Poetic Path,glad u liked it! 🙂
Gud lines…You showed the selfish part of human race.."I seek only survival"Great one..