Pain gifted to foes, is easily forgot,
For that pain was always meant so.
Pain to a friend, leaves scars forever,
For both hearts suffer the pain a lot.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
me 1st.. yipee..!yeah .. really very true.. it really hurts a lot..!i suffered frm it..! anywayz.. keep writin.. 🙂
Friend or foe…they never fail to pain you; its for you to set the pain aside and move on…the people= let them remain there forever pinching you, to their heart's contentment…..and out of the pain comes nice poems! :)nice verse, Vinay:)wishes, devika
they never fail to hurt you, i meant 🙂
very touchy.. pains frm frnds alwys leave a scar, bt we harly memorise d pains given to foes…
pain makes u realize truth of life…urs..hemu..
yaa..i agree..:)..very nicely versed dear:)..
Very Well Said Vinay 😀 Excellent Post 🙂 😀
Hmm.. perhaps..
Sahana,thanks very much! 🙂
Yellow Tulip,glad u liked it! 🙂
Aria,perhaps? hmm.. it is isn't it? if the friendship is true, u get hurt as much as ur friend! 🙂
Hemu,yeah, it does dude! indeed it does!
Rimz,exactly! :)coz we want to hurt the enemy!friends, not as much! it pains to hurt a friend! 🙁
Very true… It hurts from someone who should give love and caring..hard to heal .. leave a deep scar..probably it will stay like that inside for eternity …Yet i survived and moved on ..:)
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Devika Ma'am,yes ma'am. friends and foes both hurt u in different manner. but the pain given by a friend i feel is more! it stays longer! harder to move on sort of! :)it does get nice poems! but why get pain to write?
Shriya,guess many have had this hurt!keep reading dear! :)glad u r first today! 🙂
We are expierience pain in our lives from time to time, it hurts like hell at the time but somehow we get over it, It may take time but there is always a light at the end of the tunnel.Good post.Yvonne.
Vys,yeah dear.. i survived.. yet it feels hard to move on doesn't it? the eternal scar which is way deep, not at all easy to heal!
Yvonne,yes. light at the end of the tunnel indeed! 🙂 but the darkness seems very long when it is caused by friends! 🙂
But the same pain can keep the hearts forever together..
well said… Pain n Foes go hand in hand .. But, Pain n Frnds go no man's land … Cheeeeeerssss ….
Pramoda,yes, but why gift the pain without reason? :)friendship has its pains, yes, but the mirror broken will not be same again right?!
Sau,thanks! 🙂
pain to friend is something i can never imagine of…but as a matter of fact it is not always possible that u take care that you dont hurt them…!!!hurting them is not a mistake but doing that knowingly is a mistake…!!!as far as i know….i dont hurt anyof my friends knowingly…if i did i am very sorry to all of them..!!!nicely written dear..!!!
Yamini,no.. its not always possible! i'm not saying u have to leave out the pain in friendship. i'm just saying the pain once caused will be more difficult to forget than the pain caused to a foe! :)thanks for liking! 🙂
very nice leo.. and very much true…
So true…I can't agree with u more! Great thought, beautifully expressed 🙂 Well done leo! Cheers!
You left me speechless…that much powerful effect this poem had on me!I have realized this truth many a times in life and it hurts every time!I bow to u on this one!Loved it!Keep it up!
Angel,thank u! 🙂
Nabila,thanks very much! :)very truth in this! i know.
Manivannan,many thanks! 🙂 glad to see u again…
Loved these lines… very meaningful! :)I know how it feels to hurt a friend and also how it feels when a friend hurts you! Awful feeling it is…
Aarthi,indeed it is very awful! 🙁
ohooo…i got late again…sorryy Leobut better late than never…beautiful lines!!really the wounds given by strangers or enemies heal up soon.but the ones given by friends always leave the heart aching!well written as always!keep writing!take care!
Parzi,please don't start with an apology…its a bit weird, considering u come so fast! :)glad u liked it and agree with it! :)take care!
Pain given to anyone, friend or foe, leaves a guilt in your heart…which you realize sooner or later..:(
Rosie,no, if u give to foe wantedly, there is no guilt involved at all i think!
its nice leo…keep goin 🙂
Snow White,thanks very much! 🙂