Pearly moon, show thy face,
Reflect thy light on these waters;
So halcyon they are right now.
Lead me to him who awaits me,
A star by your side was my love.
Rising tides embracing the wind,
Take me when enraged is the sea;
There many miles below, a dock.
A vessel so fine, rests there alone,
My love waits there, for wedlock.
Dark night, I pray, engulf me,
I wish not to see the light again;
My wait, it shall not end soon.
Only a star, I wish now to see,
It is he, smiling beside the moon.
Wedlock in heaven, for us waits,
Just get to his side soon, I must;
For his wait has been very long.
Just a moment more, here alone,
Then by his side, where I belong.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
I always enjoy your poems and this one is no exception, great use of words and description.Yvonne.
good 1
Nicely done..:) Keep it up!
oye…..how can u do this yaar??? its so beautiful….perfectly written dear…loved it..!!!
i'll always luv u..!jus so touching π
Wonderful to say the least Vinu..:)
this is exceptionally beautiful dear…:)..ur poems jus take me to that world:)..very beautiful dear:)
Yvonne,thank you so much. glad u liked it! π
Preetilata,only so short comment di? soooo busy? :)thank u. glad u liked it!
Pramoda,thank you so much! π
Fantastic Poem Vinay π π I Was Lost In Someother World π Extremely Loved It A Lot π π
Yamini,thank u so much! :)i do it with inspiring comments from you n my other readers i guess! π
Shriya,thanks dear! π
Vyshu,thank you so much! π
very touching and well expressed….
Yellow Tulip,my poem takes you to that world? :)oh, thank you so much dear!
Sahana,thank you! are you still lost? π can i help u find your way back? π
Amity,thank you…
ahh…just liked the charm of the poem….
a touch of dark but sweet π
Rimz,thank you! π
Floreta,thanks! glad u liked it! π
calmly fallin in love
WOW WOW WOW!!I just loved it!! Beautifully written :)>>Hugs<<
how do you manage to do that always Leo…your words put life into your imagination and that leads to creation of superb poems…this one is really outstanding…you have captured the love and pain beautifully in your phrases!awesome is the word!keep writing!i will keep reading and applauding!
Hi Leo/Vinay (is that right?) You are a romantic soul, for sure!This is beautiful–sense or deep longing for the Other, a sense of urgency. Nicely executed!!
lovely poetry.. you weave poems like a dream.. !Rane
Dark Night I pray Engulf me!OH HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE HAD THAT PRAYER!and when eternity calls me and him it will be wedlock eternally!love this piece! love it!sigh on should i π
wow, beautiful, so romantic, a pleasure to read.
Sona,thank you so much!
Seher,thanks! π hope u find him!
Rane,thanks a lot!
Beth P.,indeed thats right! :)thank u so much!glad u liked it!
Parzi,glad u liked it! thank u for all the praise! π
Nuchu,thanks dear!
Joie,thanks! π
wow.. its very very very beautiful leo.. im just speechless.. superb yaar..poetry at its best.. this is one of my fav among urs.,..:)
Angel,thanks! π glad u liked it such a lot!and for adding to ur favorites as well!