Is This My World?

Not a day passes
Without questioning myself
Reflecting my thoughts
Sometimes feel lost in this world
Do I belong here?
I do not find peace at all
Restless for answers
Waiting to surrender myself
To awaiting death
Like fallen leaves in autumn
Mind flies with the wind
Wandering without control
A nomad in life
Wavering mind still holds on
It travels with hope
Blind it walks, allured by fate
Yet seeking destiny

The poem is partly fiction! It has nothing whatsoever to do with my state of mind right now! πŸ™‚ I do question myself, but not sad right now & I always travel with hope!

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

42 thoughts on “Is This My World?”

  1. just touched my heart very very very beautiful leo.. love it.. even though its expressing sad feeling..its like ur expresing what im feeling.. thanku:)

  2. hey Pramoda! :)i added an edit after ur comment came!i m fine! the poem is only part fiction!i am fine! a bit down with headache, but not by gloom! :)thanks a lot!

  3. awesome…liked n loved…i jst wonder wat level of imagination u ppl hve who cn compose such pieces without really being in such state of minds.. grt work dearie..:)

  4. hehe! its partly imagination, partly reality Rimz! :)one time experienced this, but now i am fine! :)glad u liked n loved it!thank you!

  5. I hear you loud and clear .. I'd say its nice to ask yourself these questions off n on .. despite the fact that.. perhaps there are no answers ..

  6. Leo, I can so relate this poem to the picture… it describes those times I desperately am seeking an answer to some unspoken need in my heart. Sometimes the heart flies free and other times in seems to be bound to the tracks… you captured that moment perfectly.~April

  7. I guess we all feel this way some time or the other…glad to know you are not sad right now. I love your work and I don't mind saying that over and over again πŸ™‚

  8. hey Leosorrrrry…I got late again….hmm..another wonderful piece of work..and the relief factor is that its partly for the other reality part..plzzzz cheer up…and smile..thats how you should be because you make others around u smile always…so now your turn…take care alright and don't worry about anything…at least try not to…god bless you!

  9. you are not late! πŸ˜€ it is today's poem itself Parzi! :)it is partly fiction, but the real part is that i keep surviving! :)thank u so much for the encouraging words!

  10. sure dear Desi! πŸ™‚ will continue my good work! :)do comment on my poems.. u miss lot of them!i'd love ur opinions too, praise as well as criticism!thank u! πŸ™‚

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